Eldi's profile

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AGE: 27
LOC: Ontario, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 05

My name is Robert, I am trying to become a writer of both short stories and comic books though I do not know anybody who can draw so mostly right now it is short stories.

I am 24 years old, live in southern california and have way to much time on my hands, sometimes. Other times I work entirely to much and get crabby. I hate my job.

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I've seen it rain before But I ain't ever seen it pour like this. And, yeah, I've felt pain But I ain't ever hurt quite like this. Sometimes I wonder Whats with the thunder, And if Rain drops are for clensing, Why do they fall resembling, The tears of Those In mourning. And why do these tears fall with out warning? Should we dance and sing in the rain? Should we hide and let the dirt from our past remain? Is this some kind of baptism or is it Noah's flood? Is this rain destruction, celebratio...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Feed.
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404. This has been getting to me. Google can return several hundred thousand results in just under a second but trying to find the truth is impossible. Any link I follow is unauthorized by my ISP and I've got the strongest membership they sell, albeit under someone else's name, but if I try to investigate the history of this company, I am blocked. I can access their official site and anybody who pays them for the privilege of being one of only two thousand web sites and that is it. Who the f...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Sea Mail
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The strangest thing had happened long ago when men had been the kings of the Earth. They abused Her. They neglected Her. They bled Her dry. They pumped Her full of poisons. They carved into Her skin with their machines with out ever consulting the living planet. In truth, they nearly killed Her, but you see, living things fight for their lives. It is part of why anything alive can survive. Darwin noticed it first, I think. The Earth decided it no longer liked being abused and struck back. Ev...
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Short Story / Monsters In the City
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"Do you believe in monsters? No? You should and I'll tell you why…" Detective Yates takes a drag off his Camel to let the question linger in the air as thick as the smoke he exhales. "Monsters," he continues, "are very real. If you keep your eyes open on the streets you will see them." "Oh, come off it Sir. You don't honestly expect me to believe that there are vampires and werewolves running around Oakland do you?" The rookie hasn't learned respect for his partner and that could get him kill...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Aoide
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DEPARTURE "This is not water running here These thick rebellious streams That hurtle flesh and bone past fear Down alleyways of dreams" -Countee Cullen, Harlem Wine Babylon’s falling to rise no more Oh, Babylon’s falling, falling, falling Babylon’s falling to rise no more. Oh, Jesus, tell you once before, Babylon’s falling to rise no more To go in peace an’ sin no more -Babylon's falling(Anonymous) -1- "A storm is coming. I can feel it in the air at night. I can see it on the horizon. I have ...
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Short Story / Between Love And Hate
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Poetry / Me vis-a-vis Me
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Poetry / My Girl
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Poetry / untitled
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