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Beautiful.

I generally really do not know what to say about this poem - overall I'm very impressed with it and I don't believe I have anything negative to say about it.

I believe this poem has beautiful imagery; as if you do have a very unique understanding of the 1960s and you captured that essence very well. I liked how, when reading it, I envisioned a very techni - colored world filled with the cheesy products that were being produced. Very well done.