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AGE: 23
LOC: Emmett, ID
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 09

I sing, write, draw, and act and love interacting with other creative people. I like to hang out with my friends, and playing video games on the weekends. I love music and ejoy cuddling up with a good book on cold days.

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Poetry / Heartsong Dreams
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To bring my lips to your ear whispering softly of paradise! Our two hearts, together, keeping the beat of the eternities- Witness to the birth of love enough to staunch the flow of time itself! The purest song streaming, quicksilver, from your soul to my own and back again, As we watch the daybreakunfold hearts entwined, bodies thrumming' with the promise of tomorrows' shared adventures!
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Poetry / Untitled
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So she sits in Desolation Windows blackened, towers silent Now the withered too barren soul No more the resplendant flags, Victoriously waving. Soley the Stones, gone cold and Dieing.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / A Few Thoughts
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Why is it, do you think that we tend to hurt most those we least wish to? On When Night is Falling (the movie) Q: "...On the homosexuality problem...? A: "Well I don't really think it's a problem per say... I cannot beliece God would be so cruel as to decree that those people..." {we}"...could never be satisified in their lives." How can look at another human being and say they are not as good as I am because they love that way.? Is not the ability to love something to aspire to? Does love no...
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Short Story / As yet Untitled
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I dreamt of you last night. This was, I must admit the second dream in which I've seen you, but this one was different than the first dream; then you were a passing face, but this time... this time the entire night was dedicated entirely to you... Strange isn't it? Considering I haven't seen you in so very long, that I should have memorized all the minute details of your face. Anyway, the dream- I had become a Vagrant, I'm not sure how, but I got the feeling that it was, for the most part by ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / lonely days
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Hello. who are you? Quite the question to ask someone you've just met. My eyebrow rises in spite of myself. It is a bit of a loaded question to ask somone who's name you're not even sure of. Perhaps they are nearer to a chameleon in nature, shifting their visage and changing stance with the surrounding company. Maybe the image is not entirely clear... or a little to clear for comfort...? You never really know. Such a simple seeming question and yet... Well, the sun continues moving across the...
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Poetry / blinking demon
This piece seems to me to show an incredibly unique and extraordinarily creative view of the evolution of the ancient myth. It definately holds the attention and captures the imagination. Great work!
Poetry / Choices
A very interesting piece you've got here. The use of imagery in the verses is very good but a loved the use of line placement to give the reader a visual image the whirlwind the object is experiencing. An excellent piece, all around, with exception of one or two typos. Great work!
Short Story / FaceSpace Miss Tell
Reading this even after I've heard it once still brings laughter to my lips. Well done, love!
The imagery and flow here are excellent! I love the story and its meaning as well. If I would add anything it might be a bit of play with line placement and stanza spacing giving a visual image of the Uneven Spiral. All in all a very good read- bravo!
Short Story / Random Junk
Make it a longer short story! Ghis is a good begining, but I was left wanting more. What does Whitney's day have instore? Why is the subject of Justin both painful and worn?
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