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LOC: LA, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 02
LOC: LA, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 02
I have a team of filmmakers in Los Angeles. We write, cast/act, shoot, edit each project on our own and on high end HD equipment. We are always looking for a good story.
Currently we are shooting a 30min film/digital movie in NJ.
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INT/EXT. CAR An SUV pulls into the driveway. The large metallic gate slowly creeps open. The car drives forward to reveal a beautiful house with a white ivory fountain in front. It drives around the oval driveway and stops at the big white doors. The architecture of the house is grand, classical. Bronze statues of playing children align the property. Tall trees grow for miles in the distance. Dad angrily gets out of the car, grabs his son and walks inside. The car shakes from his strength. Be...
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INT/EXT. CAR An SUV pulls into the driveway. The large metallic gate slowly creeps open. The car drives forward to reveal a beautiful house with a white ivory fountain in front. It drives around the oval driveway and stops at the big white doors. The architecture of the house is grand, classical. Bronze statues of playing children align the property. Tall trees grow for miles in the distance. Dad angrily gets out of the car, grabs his son and walks inside. The car shakes from his strength. Be...
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INT/EXT. CAR An SUV pulls into the driveway. The large metallic gate slowly creeps open. The car drives forward to reveal a beautiful house with a white ivory fountain in front. It drives around the oval driveway and stops at the big white doors. The architecture of the house is grand, classical. Bronze statues of playing children align the property. Tall trees grow for miles in the distance. Dad angrily gets out of the car, grabs his son and walks inside. The car shakes from his strength. B...
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I have to say that I do not follow all of your symbols: I thought the last line was a little corny and staged. I don't quite understand what nightgown eyes are. I did understand that you were "yearning" for this woman and she must be next door or nearby where you can hear her fingernails and feel her pulse.
That's a very nice, clean Christian song. I just graduated Pepperdine where we went to Youth Ministry together and I can see this song being sung there. I like it because it's very one-on-one with the Lord which is religion in a nutshell. "despite myself, God's been good to me" is a great line.
Great little poem! It has rhythm and a story. I can see a little boy sneaking around and reconsidering. Only one line took me out of it "Should I peek or shouldn’t I Oh what would be the best What if this is one of Santa’s little tests" I don't know if the count is off or if it's just me but I wanted to point out the only time/thing I had a problem with. I like the words/idea of santa testing the boy. He is very clever to be considering this and I enjoy that you let us get in and stay in his ...
So I read your poem after reading like 10 others and wrote this sort of mean review: Dorky is such a contemporary ugly word. I was SO hoping that you would say something clever after reading the first 3 lines. I have to say I am disappointed. You could always say that the swan does not find class and act gracefully as a swan like that other saying "you can take the animal out of the jungle but you can't take the jungle out of the animal." Then before pressing save I read your note about your...
Well the good news is that when I read this I thought "this could be a song" before I realized these were lyrics. I don't know what time this song is describing but I picture a medieval castle with a woman in corset dress and locks sitting on a window sill with a candle.
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