Is this a book you've already published? It was good enough for me. Very hot and steamy...Hmmm...I would have liked to read more into it. It was a hot scene, but I like to know the story.

[Can I show you where I’ve fallen? Let me take you down. Then into your ear I’ll whisper, ‘I love you. I mean it’.] This wasn't hot romance. It felt like an innocent love. Maybe even a loss of love. I think it needed more. It's not my favorite, but I have issues with understading all poems. This piece did soften my heart after reading another piece that was hot and steamy. I think you could go far as a writer, but as with all, a little improvement could help.

This is the type of poem I like to read. For the most part, it floats through my mind. There were a few spots that could be revised a little. And some typos. But this could be turned into a book. I loved it. I was practically crying. -Elysium

Your words flowed evenly, and I understood everything. But it didn't pull me in. Maybe if I had more of it to read, I'd be intrigued. It's a small piece, so for now, it sounds like it could be turned into a publishable story. -Elysium

I was pulled in immediately. If the rest of your book is as good as that, I'd buy a copy. It was right up the alley with all these western romance novels my sister is bringing me to read. I loved this, and if you post more of your book, I'd love to read it. -Elysium

Beautifuly written...

This was really good...I almost cried.:(

I'm not poetic-I can't get the beat of it...I don't really get this poem. I apologize if I'm just reading it wrong.

I'm really sorry. I can't get passed all of the errors. Punctuation, Grammar, and Spelling... Honestly, I can't push myself passed the first "sentance"... Maybe using Microsoft Word or something-it corrects grammar and spelling errors on it's own...