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AGE:
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LOC: North Lima, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 28
LOC: North Lima, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 28
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As day turns to night house windows begin to fill with light, As if a mirror was placed over the town, lights begin to appear in the sky too, One, then two, five, then ten, The stars begin to multiply some big and bright but others small and dim, What is dark now is light with the moon rising above the small town, casting a shadow over all, A tall, swirling, black tree now appears in the front of the town like a spirit of the night and the rolling mountains now become the backdrop on this sta...
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I think you really discribe the love for a person well. The second line"what i see is my lover's heart staring back at me" doesn't flow very well with the first line it rhymes but doen't flow. But other than that nicely done!
I think this poam is moving and I think that everyone in life goes through this stage where you feel like you are just stranded with no options until you just give up control to him and you discribed it well. I liked it!
I think this is a great poam. I go through the same exact thing with friends and you descibe exactly how i feel about it. Nicely Done!
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