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I know a little girl A little girl whose age is two Her name is Elys Rose But she's known as Minkey Moo! Every day is different Things are mostly fun Everything is an adventure To one who is so young In summer time she plays outside Without a single care Splashing in the paddling pool Getting water in her hair Running round the park On the climbing frame and swings Eating a most gorgeous picnic Chasing butterflys with pretty wings In autumn time she collects the leaves That have fallen to the...
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A very sweet poem. I like the line "Do they ignore mama and pretend not to hear" That really reminds me of my little girl. Spot on, good luck in the future.
Very strong words. This is an emotional piece and it sounds like it has come straight from the heart. I totally understand the fourth line. The whole poem is very good. Good luck in writing more.
Yes this is subtle but it did bring a smile, as didn't expect the end! Maybe you could try another few verses and keep them line with the first verse, that would be different!
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