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No-one knows why Mel: Well, it will be a huge shock for Dia when she realizes that we are going to get married. I mean, after all that has happened. You are meeting her after four years and that too, to invite her to your wedding. Tim: Yea… Mel. That was college. But now things have changed. We are smarter and more practical. I shall come in a minute. I will just slide in the wedding card. I can’t face her… Bell rings. Dia opens the door. It is Tim. Dia looks at this person in astonishment. T...
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Just like a hurricane the time will fly But a viscous lie will refuse to die Then zeal will disappear, as will all cheer sadness will set in without any tears In the long term all our graves will be dug the past will haunt and our conscience will bug The heart will be murdered and friendships killed the mind will question new bonds that we build All trust will be breached, and dignity lost Pain will cripple and energies will exhaust How much ever the guilty may cry The poisonous lie will refu...
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The Chosen Yesterday, while rocking the cradle, I admired the messenger of God, who,today is resting in peace. Born two long days ago with shiny eyes but vulnerable heart, she never budged but I could hear her talk "Mom, God is very sad He needs me more than you do... Don't cry for me."
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this is a feeling that so many poets go through; I mean when the muse goes missing and when nothing is there to write. Infact every poem must have written something on these lines in their career. The brilliant thing about poetry is that it can be also written on a topic called "nothing is there to be written". As a poet I can relate to how you feel. The comparisions about the singer and the painter you draw are also place very well.
A few weeks ago I had written a poem in a similar topic called THe chosen. The poem is there at urbis.com. The loss that you talk about is such that we just cant compare it with any thing. You have given various ways of overcoming the grief. This is a very good article for all the women who have gone through such a situation. I dont have many words but I would certainly recommend this article to everyone;
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The idea is good. Though I may not be a very good at reviewing I felt that the quote is a lttle lengthy. I presume that after semicolon the sentence that follows should be able to stand immediately...Over here it seems there is an issue with fragmentation.
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