I like your wording but I didn't like the poem as a whole. I assume that this is a poem directed towards your god? I just think it needs a little work. Until next rhyme. JW

I found this piece to be quite humorous and extremely well worded. Very well done. Until next rhyme. JW

Very well written. I enjoyed the richness of your words and the thought behind the write. Until next rhyme. JW

Very poetic and very well worded. Like any rant, there are a number of areas that seem to be nonsense and a number of those that also make sense. The same could be said about your metaphors. I like the overall meaning and I agree that this life is absurd. Well done. Until next rhyme. JW

Very original and unexpected. Though not the most poetic piece, still fitting by my standards. I would rather be surprised before reading another garbage poem that has standards for its reviews. Take care and until next rhyme. JW

Nice write. I always enjoy rhyming poems and I would say this one is a easily better than most. I've heard that it is somewhat hard to get published, so good luck to you with that. I too am a rhyming poet if you are at all interested. Take care. JW

Nice subtle rhymes here. I liked the who thing except for the line with the sexy little rhyme that shmoooozes. The line seemed out of place to me. Other than that I thought that this was a fine little poem. Until next rhyme. JW

Nice.

Sad but true. Nice spin on perception and realization of viewpoint. Until next rhyme. JW

A little corny mixed with a little wit. Nice flow and rhyme scheme throughout although it was a bit simple. Still a nice write in the end. Until next rhyme. JW