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AGE: 20
LOC: Conway, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 07

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Poetry / Defiant Beauty
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When I was young and beauty old I watched all words drift away. when I saw their tears at man's great sword I hid my soul within the wind, and that day i perished. Of all the grief inside me I know not of one as distressed, as the whispers of the trees of the music that pours out through this soul that echoes. It resonates. Touché heart, i bled for you. Fingers bend unwillingly to do your malicious deeds. They fold under weight that is tiring. Simply implying your need has caused ...
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Short Story / Too Close to the Water
Wow. I loved it. I grew up in Florida and your "letter" was amazing. The only part that i lost focus in was when you broke in explaining how to catch crabs to describing "... our spot...", which i understand is how a child would do so, but it seemed dull. I loved when you asked questions to the ocean, just exactly how a child would. You're personification of the water using words like boiling, bubbling, and brewing creates a perfect image in my head and i can taste saltwater in the back of my...
That's very good. its good to love everybody, or at least enjoy the company of the rest of the world, because we have to live together.
Quotes / My reality
I agree, i think its because i read too much, i dont know about you, but this is a good quote for people who spend a lot of time exploring the fictional world
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