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AGE: 19
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 20
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Quotes / 6 Word Memoir 1
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Student loans suck. Ramen is delicious.
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Poetry / Goodnight...
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Lead down a dark dimly lit hallway Too old to fight Too old to be surrounded by so many Unfamiliar faces After the drive After hanging my head out of the window as usual After being abandoned by One who claimed to love me most I want to go home Being alone is quite scary at my age and I'd rather spend my lazy days Lying at the boy's feet Raising my head whenever I craved attention Never let down Sometimes we'd even, Go outside, Rain or shine to The big backyard that was, Finally mine and, We'...
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Poetry / Goodnight...
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Lead down a dark dimly lit hallway Too old to fight Too old to be surrounded by so many Unfamiliar faces After the drive After hanging my head out of the window as usual After being abandoned by One who claimed to love me most I want to go home Being alone is quite scary at my age and I'd rather spend my lazy days Lying at the boy's feet Raising my head whenever I craved attention Never let down Sometimes we'd even, Go outside, Rain or shine to The big backyard that was, Finally mine and, We'...
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With infinite amounts of time to give A warm shoulder to cry on And no life of my own I'll always be there for you With extensive knowledge of human behavior The ability to detect the emotion in your voice And an ear that listens so closely I could tell you the rate at which your heart beats There is no problem, situation, ordeal, or debacle That I can not resolve I will stay on the phone with you For hours on end Until you realize and truly believe that what he did What he said, and who he i...
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Poetry / Your Friend...
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With infinite amounts of time to give A warm shoulder to cry on And no life of my own I'll always be there for you With extensive knowledge of human behavior The ability to detect the emotion in your voice And an ear that listens so closely I could tell you the rate at which your heart beats There is no problem, situation, ordeal, or debacle That I can not resolve I will stay on the phone with you For hours on end Until you realize and truly believe that what he did What he said, and who he i...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / my six word memoir
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Short Story / The Singer
Who knew you could say so much with so few words. Great job, I hope you get in.
I really enjoyed reading this. My favorite quote was “Let me use my pencil. You use your sword and feed my pencil with inspiration.” The message that I took from it is similar to the reason that I write. Yes, there were a few grammatical errors, but they didn't have much of an effect on the quality of your quotes. Your English is really good, and I hope to see a lot more like this from you. Keep up the good work!
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