Fastboyent's profile
AGE:
27
LOC: Olathe, KS
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 31
LOC: Olathe, KS
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 31
Nothing is really to be said about me. I am a writer that is it. I have one book that is being published right now as I work on my second one. I write how I feel and I feel how I write.
I know that I have the worst spelling and grammer in the world, that is why I love my editor!!! so please don’t tell me that I have spelling errors and stuff like that, I want to know about character development and if I have a good plot line to my story, enough description or not enough or too much…that is what is important to me. However, if you feel that you must tell me about my spelling, then go ahead.
Thank you and check out www.fastboyent.com
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Don't Regret Anything, Live and Learn.
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Sitting behind closed doors at his desk in the darken study, Davey sat glaring at the hand written papers spread out in front of him. Some time had passed sense he had looked at these hand written accounts of his life. They were not of any importance to anyone. The told of no major events in his life or anything like that. Instead, they told of a darker side of him, a side that only a few had been allowed to see. It was the sexual side that he had reserved for these papers, the side that he ...
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Life is fucked up Nothing is what you make it out to be And nothing is what is appears Work is a bore For those of use who have a mind We know it, the mind, goes to waist We see ourselves as something That we are not And others glorify that more They say that they have never seen an Artist at work And they think it is neat It is nothing unlike old high school classes I tell them And then go back to work They say they understand But I know they don’t As the continue to gaze Their gaze is like ...
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Four in the morning, and once again I’m wide awake. In about four hours, I’ll have no choice but to be awake. The hustle of the world around me will keep me from my desperately missed friend. All about one of the four windows in my two bedroom apartment are closed with shades drawn. The kitchen window remained slightly opened to help air out my chain smoking habit. It seems to have gotten worse recently, both my chain smoking as well as my sleep habits. I smoke because I can’t sleep. My bed h...
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While sitting back and looking Back on what I have called my life I have to think about what I have done How I have hurt the people that I loved most. I have to sit back And look at my life What I have done in the past Both recent and distant The recent will be the easer of the two It is still fresh in my head Yet it will be the most painful Because it is still fresh in my head Those who know me the best know That I have tried to change myself But will it help? Will it correct the pain that I...
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it is interesting the way you wrote the last part of this. Is it that you where just interested in the person in a lustful way or was there something more? I would rewrite that to say something that isn't so player like.
This is an interesting piece. For an essay, it is good, but I don't know if this would be good enough to be published. It is missing some energy, activity. I would suggest that if you wanted to get into essay book writing, I would look for some David Sedaris or Charles Bukowski. It would be interesting if you were able to put a little of them into your writing. You would be able to have an AMAZING piece. Best of luck to you.
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