This is pretty strong. I have often wondered if I have a hard time writing sometimes because I am afraid of my own emotions. To create, you really do have to put yourself out there. It also takes courage to put your work out for review because taking criticism is not always easy. Good job.

I think this quote is just sort of clique. Nothing original or powerful in it.

I don't particularly like this quote personally, but I do understand what you're trying to say.

Very fun, enthusiastic, and energetic. Great job!

Sorry, this really didn't do anything for me. It is very tough to say a lot in only six words. I understand your quote, but for me, it just wasn't very powerful.

It took me a few seconds to figure out exactly what you were trying to say, but once I did figure it out...it put a huge smile on my face. I am extremely verbose and am constantly having to revise my writing so that it's shorter! I think this has been my favorite so far.

I understand how you feel here because I've been there. When I first began writing poetry..this is exactly how I wrote it. It had no structure and was basically whatever came to my head. But as I've learned...if you are going to write for others to read, then you have to consider the reader when you are writing. You should think about adding some structure to this and making it more than just the ramblings on of a person in a state of mind.

The only that I could suggest to change about this piece is to just leave off the last verse. "For living is in the loving." is a very powerful and strong way to end this poem. The last one just seems a little unnecessary to me.

I thought this piece was really great! I absolutely loved the fifth verse.