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AGE:
42
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 14
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 14
Hi all,
I guess I am here to get noticed, so to speak. This idea of reviewing other peoples work? I’ll give it a go. Don’t be expecting too much as I am just like the rest on this site, trying and improving. I can only give my opinion which in the long run may be the boost you need to continue but not an indication of publication potential….
I have always wanted to write, only confidence lacking.. I am a single mum who wanted a life to write from before I had anything of interest to say…
Thanks for reading the opening paragraphs, to a book in am intently writing at the moment and I wish everyone the best of luck for what you are searching for here….
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The very sound of my key, sliding into the lock of my own front door, instantly releases the shroud we all wear when we leave our safe haven, our castle, our home. The one place we can pander to our deepest desires and indulge in the odd fantasy or two. On the upside that is, the down however has a very different story to tell. This home, this castle, this safe haven becomes a prison to some, a place of oppression. A place to fear any return. But return we must, home at the end of the day. T...
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This was an incredibly moving story. Very well written, I cried at the end. If my opinion is worth anything. I think you will get published...... The very best of luck......
Being brought up with "FAITH" so to speak this really hit home for me, very amusing and uplifting. You simply must continue to write.
I really enjoyed the imagery here, the flow is fantastic. A very spiritual piece.
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