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AGE:
23
LOC: Marion, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 16
LOC: Marion, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 16
I am a sophomore at a Nazarene college. I am currently majoring in a pastoral degree to become a youth pastor. My most important hobby is music. I am doing some solo stuff and I’m also working with a friend on some R&B/Acoustical stuff. We have currently produced 3 underground albums and are currently working on a compilation one. My musical feel usually leans towards John Mayer, Guster, Ben Folds, and an Emo feel. You can either listen to my music here www.myspace.com/ericjamesbell in my video section, or you can listen to our songs at our artist page at www.myspace.com/nastyandsta
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Verse 1 Here it goes again no chapter to begin, and I'm curious, How all this will turn out. And all this pain ensues my thoughts, When I think a lot, About how beautiful she is and how I could have made her happier. Selfishness could have, Been a motivator for all this, But all I wanted was to share a television dream. A perfect home. A Perfect love to call my own. If only she'd pursue her dreams. Chorus I'm sick of this crying. Should I keep on trying to love her more? Tear upside down my w...
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Wow.... ok 1. If this is a joke it is most helarrious and I would keep it up 2. If this is real get someone some psychiatric help With that said great imagination although wishing to be in Hell is probably one of the dumbest things I have ever heard.
this is a well structured song that reaches out to all. We have all asked the question "Who are you?" and could never read the thoughts or actions of that person at that time. This song does a good job conveying the problem. The questions asked are appropriate, but I feel sometimes the sentence fragments just didn't fit. I feel like there should have been another word or syllable added to make it connect and become more smooth. I also feel that the song was held back in way that it lingered o...
Ok... well, I would say it is a good start. I am considering you are 13 so I won't be to harsh. It is pretty good for a 13 year old. Although, love isn't nearly as complicated at that age, I can see where you were going with it. I don't know if this could be put into a song because the lyrics seem to rhyme at odd places. But then again, you can never tell because there could always be some way. I like how you initiated the scenerio of looking through the smoke and going on from there. I also ...
I enjoyed this song. It is in perfect format for a song with verse chorus and an alternate chorus attached at the end. I also liked how you made alot of similarities and compared alot of the hurt with figurative speech. I have one request though. I like how the song is in that format, but I would like to see a little more explaining of things in true terms and not so much figuratively. Such as "Im falling free through the sky" This sounds just a bit to out there if you want this to actually b...
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