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AGE: 21
LOC: Baltimore, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 28

I like to meet interesting people. They might wind up in one of my stories!

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Short Story / Touch of Fate- Part 1
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Wednesday. Hump day. Most people would be glad for the middle of week because it was two days from the weekend and four from the beginning. The thing is, I’ve never cared for the middle. You see I’m the middle girl of five brothers and sisters and the daughter of two middle children. Sucks, huh? I mean I like my middle name and I like the cream that comes in the middle of those cookies but not the “middle”. You know, stuck in the middle, middle of an argument, the middle of being sane and in...
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Short Story / Touch of Fate- Part 1
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Wednesday. Hump day. Most people would be glad for the middle of week because it was two days from the end of the week and four from the beginning. The thing is, I’ve never cared for the middle. You see I’m the middle girl of five brothers and sisters and the daughter of two middle children. Sucks, huh? I mean I like my middle name and I like the cream that comes in the middle of those cookies but not the middle. It’s not that I hate the middle, it’s just not the first and it’s not the last....
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Immortality. Forever life. One cannot imagine what it is like but many live it. Some say it could never be accomplished. Mortals read about it in books and their Holy Scripture. These mortals of the world are sensible, uneducated of the world’s history, and easily preyed upon. They are preyed upon by beings that are unreal. Beings These beings feast on the life of those left behind to live mortal lives; causing fear, panic, and...some devastation in oh so quiet towns of the world. They’re cal...
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Act1, Scene 1: (Curtains open to a black stage. NARRATOR enters in blackout. N stands DC. Spot) NARRATOR: Public High School. A majority of us have been through it. For many, the best years of our lives. The good times, the bad times, and the times we want to forget but can't. We've changed from unknown freshmen to popular or not so popular seniors. We've gone through the easy teachers to evil teachers. From the career changes of musician to professor because of large suggestion of our eccent...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Everyone knows them
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Marcella Hudson entered the crowded lunch room as chatter roared and laughter bounced off the walls. Sunlight shone through the pane glass windows of John Briscoe High School. Round tables and long tables were scattered through the vast room but were filled with students from early to late teens. Marcella quickly walked to a small round table. Four girls sat at the table talking. A dark haired girl looked up into Marcella’s hazel eyes. “What is it?” The girl asked annoyed. “I just wanted to s...
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Screenplay / Almost Ophelia
"I LOVE Tess" now that I got that out the way, this is a very good screenplay. i would be interested in seeing this. MISH Tess, you have nice hair. You just keep pulling it into your face, until your face, until - Is that suppose to repeat like that or just a typo? An interesting read and it seems like a good movie ( from the first twenty minutes)
Horror / THE LOUP GAROU
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On the parts where you have words seperated, it's not needed. and diffrent sorts--- different why everything truned around--- turned around I have no friends,Perhaps you’ll feel pity,or may say i’m a crazy human being.--- I have no friends. Perhaps you'll feel pity for me or say that I'm a crazy person. WEll,that’s not waht i like.--- what I like But my life have (has had) a big change as i heard others said,(")Janie is really an annoy -thing (annoying) girl,too annoying.(") This is suppose t...
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The Goblin
This is a good story. Seems uneventful without that much dialog. To have a conversation between your main character and Kat would show their relationship a little better. The prologue seems unnecessary in the beginning. If you make it longer, possibly from the murderer's point of view then it would be interesting. Also, could you tell the audience the main character's name, first or both would be fine. An audience would like to connect with the character if possible and the first step to that...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / untitled As of yet
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Non-fiction / Jack and Todd
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