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Quotes / six words
No regrets? only possible for those with no conscience or who live a perfect life.
Short Story / 6 word story
Enigmatic, but I like it. I can picture a man standing outside before everyone else wakes up, watching the sunrise.
This is written pretty well. The only thing I would change is to convert the monetary terms into dollars and cents, as well as pence and pound, that is if you are interested in an American market. I might recommend one additional feature to your website. Allow the writers to do a profile like Myspace and facebook. One of the neat features about myspace is the ability to do a search for musicians that sound similar to famous musicians. So, if the writer's writing style is similar to a famous w...
Good fictional account of an interview about a published book. You had me going there for awhile, thinking it was a real interview. This flowed well, and I like the dialogue going on inside the writer's head with himself the whole time he is talking to the interviewer. My favorite line is: I’m trying to use this time to think of an honest answer, then I try to think of the best answer and if they are the same thing.
This is a touching story. Grammatical errors: the struggles he faced might sound better to say the struggles he faces. makes him hate himself so much that he didn’t want to live might sound better as then you are not mixing past and present tense. makes him hate himself so much that he doesn't want to live
Poetry / Lost and Found
Very humorous.
Short Story / SH-SH-SH-Shattered
Very uniqute way of saying your spirit has become hardened.
This flows well with the use of strong emotion. The use of two voices is very real. Good job of writing. On a personal note, when I get depressed I find it helps to picture myself achieving a life goal that I have. That inspires me to work towards achieving it. It's very easy to let depression ruin your life. Don't let it.
I don't think it is funny to make fun of people with mental problems. Perhaps if you put this in a different category besides humour?
Quotes / my dreams
And work to make them come true.

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