“Fighting solves everything.”
I am originally from Cleveland but now live in Palm Beach, FL. I love the weather hate the taxes. I work as a Karate instructor, (Thai boxing, BJJ, Kenpo) for those that care. I have the most beautiful wife and a wonderful child; I am lucky and thankful for them both.
I write when I can, its usually dark and borderline sinister. I am here to rip apart bad work, and in turn I don’t mind a good hard review.
To anyone that requests a review, wake up I will be brutally honest and try to help even if that means you need a total rewrite no crying about it, if you do not want to get better then do not ask form my reviews. That is the goal after all want to help and lying to you when it needs work is worse in t…
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“Fighting solves everything.”
I am originally from Cleveland but now live in Palm Beach, FL. I love the weather hate the taxes. I work as a Karate instructor, (Thai boxing, BJJ, Kenpo) for those that care. I have the most beautiful wife and a wonderful child; I am lucky and thankful for them both.
I write when I can, its usually dark and borderline sinister. I am here to rip apart bad work, and in turn I don’t mind a good hard review.
To anyone that requests a review, wake up I will be brutally honest and try to help even if that means you need a total rewrite no crying about it, if you do not want to get better then do not ask form my reviews. That is the goal after all want to help and lying to you when it needs work is worse in the long run.
My grammar is not a strong point so you need not correct every tiny error, an editor will catch that prior to publishing, so just story critiques please.
I usually don’t want to be friends if we are then reviewing your stuff won’t be in my queue and it gets annoying.
On the other hand I may want to be friends only if I like your style, if not try not to take it personally, or do, it matters little to me.
I have had requests to know see ‘real’ profile pics, but I chose the skull because I sincerely feel its fitting of my writing. If you really feel the need to know more you can find my myspace for my writing, I won’t help you, don’t bother asking. If your really interested and smart you’ll figure out who I am if not you lack the intellect to need to know and it’s no loss to me.
If you don’t like my work I will consider your review, but I also do my homework so if your into poetry and other earthy nice stuff, I will remind you should not have ventured far from you realm. In short review my work if you read sci-fi, not if you’re looking to build up cred but really would rather speak of moronic metaphors for rainbows, I will call you on it.
Gavinswar
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