GillBranion's profile
AGE:
43
LOC: LA, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 16
LOC: LA, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 16
He is a freelance writer for Red Baron Films.
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Shakespeare vs. John Hollander One step foward Two steps back Oh come on Hollander... You can do better than that! If I wrote like a monkey Or, goofed on a spell Would credence support Your insultuous tales? I challenge you pen against pen Our minds engaged The world the witness The New Yorker the stage! Will you prove your points And, graciously accept? Or, do you fear this challenge... Honorably left. Poetry fairs the sword Our skill bares the shield The world will determine Which writ...
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Here comes the "U" ! Here comes the "S" ! Here comes the "C" ! Here comes the BEST ! Here comes the HEART ! Here come the SOUL ! Here comes the BOOM ! Baby let's GO ! Let's GO ! Let's GO!
Version 2
8 Reviews
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Substitute "Cultural Blinders" for "Humane Bifocals".
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9 Reviews
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Substitute "Cultural Blinders" for "Humane Bifocals."
Version 2
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I will not be a statistic I will not be afraid To advance above the masses And become a household name I will fight my way through misery I will figure my life out My writings will become history And leave very little doubt Because I endured and I stuggled Because I sacrificed and I achieved Statues and other dedications Will be made in honor of me...
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Whoa, That's pretty trippy and I love it! It is hard to capture those kind of feelings and moments with words and have the ability to convey them to an audience where everyone understands. You do this with wonderful ease! Well done! Bravo! -Michael
Hello, I believe you have certainly established the use of "Rhythm" and "Alliteration". It would be good if you could get to the point in fewer stanzas. In my amatuer opinion, use of the words "me" and "come" (including "overcomes") multiple times takes away from the impact the poem makes... I like this poem because it matches the similar rhythmic style I use in my poems. I also like the way you keep the word usage simple without going overly "high brow" when it isn't necessary. Overall, it i...
I believe this is as good as it gets! I enjoy the first stanza & third stanza the most! However, since you are not interested in hearing suggestions about the rhyme-scheme in the second stanza I am forced to give this written work a "9" overall... The first stanza grabs you with a picturesque quality about it! The third stanza is a delightful finish! The second stanza made me envision a grueling march! Well Done! Bravo! -Michael
It's a beautiful and thoughtful poem... You have my deepest sympathy for your loss. Truly, -Michael
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