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very in the now...i like that... one thing...8th line...I think you missed a word... "All I could do would be set you free" doesn't make sense...maybe "All I could do, would be TO set you free"? or you might think of changing the whole thing around to something like... "To set you free, would be all that i could do" anyway...it makes its point...and was heart warming to read.

I felt as if I was pulled into another world with an eagle’s grip soaring through the sky blood pressure rising half scared of being dropped half excited to see the world from such an enlightened viewpoint… I especially appreciate that you take notice of all the little things that too often go unnoticed… Thank you for that little pleasure…

i like this... selfish guy sits alone in reflection for a min... recognizes that he's morally lacking... then im gussing the lights come back on and he's goes about his life in the same manner... is that close? its so brutally honest... i hope you meant it that way... cause if its about spiritual growth or something... that wouldn't be as interesting...

this isnt really my favorite type of music... but i like it... "will you die like heroes"...catchy is this metal...or ?

this is so sweet... its so pure and from the heart that i would feel bad even adding my two cents... you should submit to hallmark...