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AGE:
21
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 26
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 26
Let’s see, I’m Harleigh, I’m nineteen years old, I have many nicknames, but i’m mostly known as Tom. And I write to let out some of my over-active imagination.
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Once upon a time. Isn't that how a fairy-tale is supposed to start? Well, fine. But what about normal stories. Stories that aren't all good versus evil, Prince Charming's and happy endings. Sure, there's a prince and possibly a happy ending. But it's never as simple or easy as ABC. Sometimes there are more complex obsticles, more depth to a person. Sure, Cindarella had to pretend to be someone she wasn't, but she had the help of a fairy godmother. Which, let's face it, isn't very realistic. ...
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I really liked this. It really painted a picture for me, so I understood it for the most part. Really intense yet simple enough to enjoy again. I enjoyed reading =]
Again, dialog. You write funny dialog. Though details help, I know you do go back through these stories and pick them apart until you can make them better. It's just easier to get feedback first. I love that the relationshop between your characters are also rediculously unconventional. Hot pizza dude owns my life, the end. And the TaylorAaron love must never die.
I will tell you why I love this story. It's funny. I told you that from the beggining. After telling you that you were the teenie out of the two of us, this happened. I just wait for it to come true because that would definiteley go down in the history of our friendship. You made superstars pathetic. I both love and hate you for that, love you because it's beyond amusing and hate you because I laugh so hard I get wierd looks from family. Either way, I love your dialog.
When I first read this, I just about peed from laughing so hard. You know that because I kept telling you I was laughing. Knowing who you base characters on and the fact that you make them dumber than they are, putting all that together just about makes it amazing. I love it.
You already know what I think of this story, but I'm gonna review it anyway. I was serious when I was always telling you that your stories were awsome and when you had the idea for this one? Wow, I was actually worried about how it would turn out at first. It wasn't what you normally wrote. But I guess taking a chance and writing something completely different is rare these days. People are scared to write stories of two pop-star rivals, which is amusing but still. I think you should edit the...
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