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AGE:
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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 15
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 15
I’m michael! =D
Yes that is me in the picture =D
I write horror or fantasy books
At the Moment 3 chapters of my long running vampire book are up here.
In order (just so you know)they go in:
Prologue [obviously]
The vampire’s christophe armand etc.
De Sang Et de la musique
They’re apparently addictive aha.
And I’m also going to start writing a post-apocolyptic horror called ‘In The Dark’, which is about a group of five people trying to survive in a world where oxygen is a drug. And just to make it interesting, one of the group is a serial killer XD
But yeah, don’t expect that up to soon.
When I write horror
It takes me ages…
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Doesn't it just feel like everything's slowly slipping through the fingers of time? When all you see is darkness, you begin to dream of the sublime... Your utopia forms in your minds eye, as reality is slowly stripped away! I Won't Forgive, I won’t forget, If You don't believe it, then see it! There's no mercy for a Judas like you, Hiding behind someone else, To distort the truth, who would think you needed help To destroy all our lives? An' the moon is slowly engulfed by the clouds of pollut...
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Your Disease Don't know why all you have is a key in your hand, And a face in your head, a smell on your clothes, This place is still real, I can feel it running through my veins, But driving won't get you far enough from this place.... I know it's deceiving, Everything's make believe, Please, cough on your medicine, Please, Choke on your disease. Bulbous pains on your chronic bruises, Please, cough on your medicine, Please, choke on your disease! Cigar ash burns on your skin, 500 words stumb...
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Another blunt tool with a forked tongue, After the perennial torture will you be done? As I crawl over the bleeding red floor, You bring a whip and a smile Through the door that keeps me locked in! I feel love, I feel sick I shouldn’t feel ‘pregnated with all your sorrow. I’ll hear the key in the lock And scream ‘“Fuck!”’ and bleed shit Until tomorrow Because you make it so Because you make it so Because you make it so Like a li-on-courte! ‘“It’s alright”’ she says “ This won’t hurt a bit At ...
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Chapter Two De Sang Et De La Musique (Blood and Music) Edmund was vastly confused. These two vampires had saved him but only to question and kill him, thinking he was Helmont De Kartik. But why would they think this? Did he look like Helmont De Kartik? It was a question he wanted answered, but the more he watched the Vampires Christophe Armand and Mathieu Bohmond, the more he became enrapt with and by the enigma of them both. Who were they to him? Who was he to them? The whole situation was a...
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Chapter One The Vampire’s Christophe Armand and Mathieu Bohmond Edmund Beechcraft awoke on a damp sandy beach. He stood immediately and began brushing himself down, seeing the sand on his clothes. Staring back out over the sea, he remembered it had been a rush of salty smelling cold water that had numbed his limbs almost on impact as he dove like a dolphin into the depths of it. Muskets had cracked after him and dark plumes of smoke had rose from the ship he’d just escaped from. He remembered...
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The talking immediately gripped me, which is obviously good, and I think when this hopefully gets made into a series, you will need some good actors to pull of Tom and Rob's roles, because they seem like very deep characters. Some grammar advice 'Chase: I’m afraid you’ve gone an lost me sir.' I think you need a 'd' on the end of that 'an', unless you are dropping the 'd' for a slang type affect, but then you should put an apostrophy after the 'n' to show you have dropped the 'd'. I think your...
Very good insight on how to write a limerick. I could see this appearing in a primary school classroom =]
Kingdom of Taeriel, This sounds very similar to Tamriel, from Oblivion. Now I don't know if you've ever played this game, but I have, and i noticed straight away that it was similar (if not a pun of) Tamriel, and this means others will also. Without contact with most anyone else put an "al" before most And change anyone to no one or something, because when reading the sentence it doesn't sound right. “Whoa, okay, back down I go.” Dizziness overwhelmed him from the sudden movement, and he coll...
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