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the seas of entropy have vomited a scabrous beast onto the shore of my liquor store again a creature of unhealth and woe a horror of ravenous despair a toothless grinning revenant it's lambent gaze is turned on me a dreadful need that chills my bones shines corruption upon my shrinking skin to save myself i must dig deep to pull the object of my faith a talisman of no uncertain strength with a shout I brandish green unfettered glorious in the breeze mammon's gifts will set m...
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i left her alone last night once more the bastard another cruelty for the list the one written upon her cheeks in tears and on her palms in bloody crescents was it worth it empty conversation fueled by booze and blow the life of the party strangers proclaiming love slapping my back people who dont give two shits when it comes down to it when the drugs are gone when they all have gone i remain too late too high i havent called her i never call her shame and self recrimination ...
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So You Think... So you think it makes a difference that vote you cast As if the choices were not already preordained laid out like comfortable jammies on your cozy bed your party is right and the others are so wrong you hate them spitting and ranting your candidate is best Did you know they are telling you so you believe what you want to you believe what they want you to there must be order there must be good guys in white fucking hats yeah your guy has all the answers that's what ...
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This really evokes the mystery of the Mayan woman beautifully In these eyes an old world beckons beyond pueblos, ranchos, rosaries, to givers of breath, bringers of fire gods’ eyes winking through the trees, feathered serpents on jaguar pads. Someone’s daughter, someone’s mother, someone’s lover, someone’s wife, always young and old as time. Very nice imagery I could really see it I read this aloud to myself to really get it It might be nice to break this up into stanzas to give a pause for t...
I definitely like part 2 more but this is nice There are some nice images here like: Later, I found you on my doorstep, a bohemian rhapsody Guitar in hand, you played my soul Metallica’s “Unforgiven,” I think it was This among others resonated It seems like the structure kind of breaks down towards the end, but you could easily tweak that to get it where you want it I can relate to the feeling you have when there is someone you love who will always be an unattainable mystery I thank you for s...
This piece is like a beautiful little fairytale Very poignant I was left with a bittersweet kind of feeling Nicely done
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