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LOC: Omaha, NE
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Pain it can be a pleasure or it can be a harsh But don’t think that every pain you feel is good One pain could set you free of something or not That pain could be like a harsh winter night Blowing an pulling you into its nightmare of horror Or it could let you blow free in the winter land And feel the wind pick at you as you stand And gaze at all the wonder the world holds Pain can be like love it can be good and wholesome Or it could be like a curse and pull you down into a black hole And be...
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Good-bad Evil-pure Emotions Are we all evil Or are we all good Do we love the life that is lied down Destined for us we do despise the world Love that so many take advantage of When they try and get what they want Without any thought of the other person Why we say we are sick Sick of life Tired of emotions And hate words To the point many have taken their lives To leave behind an unfinished story Without knowing the end Or do many of us know the end And thats why we leave before seeing it Pro...
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I went from being on top of the world To being stomped into the ground Feeling lower then dirt Yet I held my head high Because once was pain Twice I learn from my mistakes And third I am punished My head whirled I was senile from hurt I hurt so I was happy My emotions were mixed Moved And on the fritz This is your mind on drugs Confused yet happy so sad mad so mad inane so insane your drive yourself mad why do you feel this way
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The moon is hidden by the clouds as the world goes black from afar there are distance screams of piercing agony. I’m standing in the middle of a cool desert when I hear the soft thump of horse huffs, the voices have died down and literally died. My heart pumps as I start to run, my face as stark white ghost under the gray moon. The horses scream out my name or what seems as name, as I see the riders’ bone white faces. All five are staring skulls with black cowboy hats charging. For a split se...
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Pierce my heart with the needle of hate, rip it from my chest and look me in the eyes. Pierce my eyes and blind my vision from the world let thy not see the hate. Pierce my rage for I have for you, save yourself from my wrath that I bestow upon you. Pierce the end of my days limit your days to one, for you have one day to make it right. Pierce the love that you had thrown it away like there was never that emotion. Pierce the truth spread your lies just to fit in tell your lies just to see thr...
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I will admit it could use a bit work not sure exactly where to pin point it but, it wasn't bad Just a few tweaks here and there but i liked it, and i would say you do have talent worth working out. It say "need a title" well If i titled it, I thought of "Empty" then "The Eyes of The Gull" Are my suggestions, keep working not bad
I like that you used this type of subject and the stanza for this kinda poem is good, but i think you should break it where you hear pauses it seems more fit for this like the single words can be left but a few of the sentence and such could be put together over all it wasn't bad -Inn
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