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AGE:
18
LOC: Natick, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 16
LOC: Natick, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 16
Hi! I’m Janet.
I’m incredibly lazy, so I’ll finish this at some other point.
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The fleeting slumber was cut off as blinding sunlight pierced through the tattered curtains, hitting my face in bright, prying rays. I really had no intention of getting up, but the sun told me otherwise. I let out a light groan, rolled onto my other side and strained to look at the old clock on the wall. It was almost 2 in the afternoon. I normally didn't sleep so late; I must have been unusually tired. I stood up, as much as I reviled to have, and skulked into the kitchen. "Morning, Sleepin...
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"Mirja, did you take your medicine?" Possessing no curiosity, I had chose to stare out the window as my therapist drowned me with waves of empty words. I stopped listening after the fourth visit; this was now approximately my fifteenth. I had quickly realized that either what she said could never help me, or I just didn't want the help. Habouring a sigh, I forced myself to look at her. "Yeah, I did," I replied uninterestedly, instantly returning my gaze to the falling snow. I could feel her g...
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Love was something denied to me for so long. Love, I always believed, was such a stupid word. But still, I had always wanted it. I'd had my fair share of infatuations, but they were nothing but bleak and empty attempts at love. And the one time I finally fully comprehended what it was, it was taken away as quickly as it had come. I still don't understand how it happened. I've tried as hard as I could, and somehow the pieces still don't seem to fit. One small tear found its escape through the ...
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That was maginificent, very good job. Not a lot of people are capable of writing classy poetry anymore, but this was brilliant. keep it up!
This has exemplary details, and vivid imagery! I especially like "'The Tree of Knowledge,' says the still silent voice of Jiminy, 'could have started as a dandelion – it is a possibility.'" I got a little lost come the end, though.
As explicit as it was, it was quite visual and written exceptionally well. It was only towards the end where it got choppy, I think, the beginning was strong and opened the topic up right away.
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