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AGE:
23
LOC: Pompano Beach, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 03
LOC: Pompano Beach, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 03
South Florida born and raised. College student for wayyyyyyyyy to long. Gonna catch a jet out of here to foggy London town once again. Make my name in fiction and vandelism. So all can remember that guy who wrote that thing about someone who did something. I only tell lies and half-truths, with a hint of the witty and a smidgen of the crafty. I get my ideas from the ganja, O my brothers.-(Clockwork Orange) The ganja and the Beatles, and the Wu and the BIG and the Lupe and not the Wayne. Definately NOT the Wayne. A bit from the stones, a heap from the Peppers, a dash of Hova, a dose from Burgess, and Mailor, and Karouac, and Kesey, and Ginsy, and let us not forget Burroughs and Thompson, and Joyce too, and Hemingway and Hornby and anyon…
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Alphabet City, USA By: J.J. Kinni Give me the podium And let me tell you my story. I’m taking you on a tailspin Through the thoughts of the shadiest city… Alphabet City, USA. Come and see the dirt… Revel in the despair. Every sin in the world is on display to witness. Come and take a glance At what the world is and what you… Us allowed it to become. Filth Grime Drugs Despotism Senseless anarchy Sex Disease Murder And rape… Rape of our past… Rape of our present… Rape of our future… Rape of th...
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Tommy Timmons of Tammany Trail The world of Tommy Timmons of Tammany Trail is a world of exploration and unique absurdity. Every day is a day of both new and uplifting promise and unrelenting personal chaos. Who knows how Tommy Timmons manages these highs and lows each day? No day is the last, only new, only different, only fluctuation. During all these days of untamed life and color, and nights filled with scoundrels and rapscallionistic events. There is one truth, one idea that is always th...
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A Uniformed World By: J.J. Kinni We are the reflection in the mirror, A reflection that reflects everyone else, Conformist is what we are. Those who strive for non-conformity Conform themselves. And on and on it goes. No originality anymore, Not in you, not in me. From frat boy to rebel without a cause Conformity is all there is left. It has all been done or is in doing. Mass conformity has brought mediocrity. No longer the special babes of our parents, Now we are only copies of originality. ...
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It was good, but too short. For this to get published, you will have to dig deeper and detail more of those inner emotions that you are trying to present to the reader. I liked the idea of the last line. The play on the darkness and the light. it could speak to the same person can't it? we all have darkness and light and we all struggle with both. I think that you can play out this emotion much, much more. it's all there. All the inspiration you need is inside all of us so just uproot that an...
I liked it. When they were gonna jab the kid with the needle i got upset. It did a good job of protraying a scene. I think that inside the young kids head is a good narrative style for you. Well written and overall enjoyable. The numbers on your questions would have been higher, but if there was more to it. This is an extremely tramatic event for this young person (for any young person) you should embrace that a bit more. Let the effects of it shine through by elaborating on what followed thi...
I liked it alot. Just one continuous rant or a poem. I think you may want to look into investing into a bit more puncuation. Not alot more. Just maybe comma or two. Sometimes when a writer writes a poem like this, or is prone to using long winding sentences, some of the best lines can be overlooked or devalued, because there is no stopping so that the words don't resonate as deep.
I liked it. I think for this to get published you will have to examine the ideas you have deeper. You want the reader to leave with a strong resonation about what they just read. This could have that if you dig deeper and use more ways to show the problems that come along with money. This could be especially effective, because of the capitalist system that we all live. It puts a higher value on financial worth, than other societies and that has always been a negative to capitalism. So i think...
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