Thats intense, and something that happens everyday. I liked it, did this really happen to you? If so do you feel any guilt or not, just curious. Nice work though.

I really like the idea of posting many haiku's instead of just one. They are each one small scene in this picture of your hood. I really enjoyed them. "Pimp dude’s Cadillac" that one was my favorite, but they are all really good. Thank you.

I think everything that was said, was said right and ended at the perfect moment. You really didn't need to write any more or less. This poem really makes me wish that we humans could learn to solve problems without violence. I really liked your poem.

wow, this poem really is a speeding roller coaster full of intense sexual energy, It was pretty good. no brakes to slow me now gyrating to the sound the musical hum of two bodies entwined in a sensual wind pleasure primed that was my favorite part of the poem, I thought the end was a little cheesy. "the morning comes but I come first." those lines sort of weakened the poem in my opinion. but overall not bad.

You have a great deal of talent I liked most all of these a lot, the last three were my favorite. The only mess up was in the one that started out: "I but sum" great job!

creative indeed! Thats pretty funny. Ide try to change the first line around, maybe my feet stink so bad, ha i dont know, good job.

This poem possesses a really cool positive energy. I really like it. The last 4 lines are my favorite. I can't wait to read more of your work.

This is pretty cool, a good read, my favorite part was: the orange street light shines in the night scrambles from sight and screams all it’s might (small typo you forgot to add "with") great job!