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LOC: Birmingham, AL
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LAST LOGIN: August 10
LOC: Birmingham, AL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 10
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An uncontrolled chaos of voices which spouted from hundreds of people, who were rushing to find their correct terminals, mixed together in a random concoction that flowed energetically through the halls of the JFK airport. There was no peace for anyone in this airport, the closest thing to peace for these people would come later when they would forcefully compress themselves into a tiny airplane just to get hurled thousands of feet through the air. There were various scents stirring through ...
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Life is like a box of chocolate. Most the time the peices taste like ass and when you finally get one worth a flip, It wasn't worth the shit you went through to find it.
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Why do we fight so hard to survive when we all know that Death is present in even the shallowest of scrapes?
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One sharp jagged line of inching death Each stab lets out a grim beat Closer the tips enclose the closer life and death meet Everything is blocked by flooding sorrow The fight for life promises demise In one hand lies a knife and the other is empty but full The knife only promises more tears But an escape from fears Unknown and sure the wrong hand is lifted as a poor man's choice Two parralled lineslay apart And forever they will, never to touch One destined to stay above, while the other below
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April 23, 1968, may have seemed like another beautiful Tennessee morning but that was proven false when a bullet exploded from the chamber of James Earl Ray’s rifle. In the sights of the assassin‘s rifle was a still young and inspiring man by the name of Martin Luther King Junior. From that day, forward James Earl Ray went from a regular man to becoming one of the most famous thieves. That day he stole the life of Martin Luther King Junior not only from Mr. King himself but from an entire na...
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This story uses good grammar and spelling but you have a giant paragraph that needs to be broken down in the middle. That causes the reader to have to intently watch the computer screen to keep their spot. Doing so hurts there eyes so thanks for the eye sore and good story.
Those font changes dont effect the story to much but I am sure they are caused by charcters placed in a certian order on your work. To use _italics_ use the underscore before and after the part you want to be italized. But about the story, I found it a good storyline and no real mistakes to complain about. I enjoyed it and wouldn't mind reading more.
This is a good story and I noticed a few sentence errors. For example the very first two sentences in the first paragraph could have been combined instead of seperated to creat a better flow. If you go back and fix little stuff like the later and people will really enjoy it. Besides that I didn't notice any other errors.
Whether the uncapitalized words are there for a reason it still causes this peice confusion. The periods can be decived as commas and forces a reader to back track once things dont add up. Besides that you have a good thing going here.
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