JaCarloHairston's profile
AGE:
26
LOC: Monroeville, PA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 07
LOC: Monroeville, PA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 07
I am a writer. Sometimes I feel I’m the greatest sometimes I don’t deserve to hold a pen.
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TMWSTW or Passive aggressive bullshit Seems that I was busy doing something close 2 nothing But different than the day before -Prince Tell us a story I know you're not boring -The Strokes But I keep on a comin' here and standing in this state Oh and I'm always reassured the situation's gettin' carried away -Blind Melon I’m sure of your ability to become my perfect enemy Wake up and face me, don’t play dead cause maybe Someday I will walk away and say, “You disappoint me,” Maybe you’re better ...
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The elusive nature of opiates, scarlet begonias and being true to someone you don’t even know
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There's no one thing that's true. It's all true. - Ernest Hemingway Everybody has a different memory. And none of it is true. - Peter Hook “The truth is I’d rather die admired and respected then live unknown. The saddest thought I can think of is someone living, existing and dying and nobody knowing or caring or remembering they existed. It’s just sad. Fuck it I don’t care what I’m known for just as long as the world knew I lived not just existed.” I say lighting a cigarette and playing with...
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When you say it's gonna happen "now" well, when exactly do you mean? see I've already waited too long and all my hope is gone. -The Smiths How Soon is Now Then the words he wanted to forget were all around. -Anne Petry “You see I am the son of no one in particular and the heir of nothing fucking special. And I’m sorry but that is unfortunately all I have to pass on to you. I have been a bastard and son of a bitch and one occasion a mother fucker. If my sins pass down God help us both because ...
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This is a very well written personal opinion essay and probably could be published in most magazines. It stirs personal opinions that could range from completely agreeing to being turned off by the facts and opinions being so interrelated. As far as the writing no real tehnical problems jumped out and very well stated.
This is very well written and unfortunately so well written and vivid that it puts mentally there which is a very emotional place. No technical problems jump out. Good job on writing a very personal and sad situation. with your level of description maybe this could turn into interrelated short stories of fiction if any level of sepration is there.
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Black and Blue: Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man in comparison with the music of the Jazz Age
I thought that this was a very informative explanation of Invisible Man and the jazz motif that it uses throughout the book. I would say this is more of a comparision of the two arts more than a critism but that aside no technical problems jumped out and if I were to read this in a magazine
Very good short story. The title makes you expect something totally different then when you read it your relieve and then it's funny as hell. Very good story I didn't see any technical problems that jumped out at me.
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