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AGE: 30
LAST LOGIN: April 04

Hi my namer is Jaci and i live in Los Angeles California.
i am make up artist.I always love to write poetry and would appreciate any feedback!

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Poetry / Shoes
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Staring at her Shoes she blocks out the world eyes unseen and hair uncurled. Lipstick is smeared and her clothes are worn through wondering why she is here and all that she knew. Sunken cheeks show there were once tears but now all that comes isn't hope just her fears. The smell of cheap liquor is still burning from her breathe and she knows all that's left to come with it is death. There is a darkness all around where a light use to be a place she feels she would much rather be. Hating the ...
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Poetry / LAST NIGHT
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He watches as the wind blows softly through her hair. Carrying away all of the sadness in her face. How long has it been since she smiled like that? No longer does she look to see if anyone is watching.As she dances under the stars with the gleam of light on her face.Her lips are moving to the beat of the drums. How long has it been since she giggled like that?The palm trees sway to the rythmn of the tide as he sees his face in her oceans eyes.He is staring wondering what is she high? If only...
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Poetry / JOHN
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Don't cry for me now that I have gone, I know that my time on this earth was not very long. But i could not stay for just one more day, so here you see me in this peace that I lay.I have lived and loved and experienced so many great things,but the time came for the angels to give me my wings. The light from my boat will guide me to "the light" and when i rteach my destination i hope you know that I am alright. My spirit will be carried through the ripples of the sea and when you look out on t...
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Poetry / Through A Drink
This is really amazing.I like the part "that we only truly appreciate when we are passed out in her gardens". I am a recovering alcohlic and could identify with your writting.Thank you for sharing it.
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