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AGE:
31
LOC: Virginia Beach, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 21
LOC: Virginia Beach, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 21
All too often, we at times, take simplicity for granted. Our days are fraught with mundane cycles of habit, whether we enjoy it or not. Waking up to the repetitive squabbling of the alarm, listening to the radio on the way to work (that sounds just as interesting as Charlie Brown’s teacher), going to a job where you know how to do your boss’s work as well as your co-workers, yet somehow he or she makes substantially more than you and then to end the day with redundant necessary personal chores. Yes, all of those actions are simplistic; however it’s basic with demanding stress backing it in the rear. When was the last time you enjoyed a leisurely stroll through a park, looked out your window to see the brillance of the blue sky or even …
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What I'm about to write WILL sound like I'm losing my mind. I guarantee you I am completely lucid. Unfortunately I am someone that suffers from extremley horrifying vivid nightmares. But the most terrifying part is not the dream itself, it is what grips me after I wake up. I have suffered from nightmares since I was a child. Most commonly the dreams consisted of someone or something chasing me. There have been few times in my adult years I have had the capability to tell myself in the d...
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This is wonderful, reading it I can actually begin to "feel" the wind. It moved me so I felt tears coming to my eyes as it brings me joy to know someone else can grasp the beauty of nature! My only "critique" would be, the rhyming is not consistent...but then again, that is what is lovely about poetry...it's never consistent.
I enjoy this quote as I am an artist who is quite often thought of as "mad". Though I wonder in your terms who is your "madness"? That would be the only critique, madness of what?... Madness of society, madness of parental verbal abuse, etc....?
This is very deeply heart felt, I liked it only, "attake" is "attack".
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