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AGE:
17
LOC: Rochester, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 10
LOC: Rochester, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 10
I am a 17 year old male. I love to write it gives me what little joy i have in life if it wern’t for writing i wouldn’t be alive. I love to read and Write and listen to music i love all art forms…
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Reality check 1..2..3 reality check 1..2..3 My brothers my friends our ignorance knows no ends, I’m sorry to inform you but we are all blind, not in our sights but in our minds, we all are content with living while others die, While we eat our dinners every night, small children stand and fight, not for their dinner but for their lives, These are the children from the third world countries, where the only world they see is full of despair and the thing we know of as hungry, The want to eat t...
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Time rolls, rhymes flow, Contented serenity, the words of perfect amenity, Time to think, Time to breathe, Time with only a pen and me, The roars of the world controlled in my hand, The pause of the timing sands in my command, Time is unlimited words aren’t prohibited, What I write is my will, These words are written with impeccable skill, With perfection these words will amaze and thrill, Confound and kill the way the world as seen in your eyes, Behold the real world and realize, That silenc...
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Reality check 1..2..3 reality check 1..2..3 My brothers my friends our ignorance knows no ends, I’m sorry to inform you but we are all blind, not in our sights but in our minds, we all are content with living while others die, While we eat our dinners every night, small children stand and fight, not for their dinner but for their lives, These are the children from the third world countries, where the only world they see is full of despair and the thing we know of as hungry, The want to eat t...
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America The Not So Beautiful??? “O beautiful for spacious skies, For amber waves of grain, For purple mountain majesties Above the fruited plain! America! America! God shed his grace on thee And crown thy good with brotherhood From sea to shining sea!” America the beautiful, Home of the free land of the brave, The place I’ll give my life for one day, With brothers in arms this country has come a long way, From the Thirteen colonies to the 50 states, Are accomplishments are more than astonishi...
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Beauty in the eyes of the beholder They say beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, While sense the day I laid eyes upon you nothing not even beauty surpasses, The perfection of the one truth, Your beauty cannot be expressed in words so I will sum it up in a couple verse, They say the eyes are the gateways to a soul, Then in that case yours must be gold, All I see is pureness perfection and non-surpassed glee, The three beauties that swirl together with such ease, To look in your eyes must be ...
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That is an absolutely amazing poem and I think every poet in the world has been at that point at least once. I am impressed with this poem just because of the light it sheds on the reality of art and more directly poetry. I sincerely hope you continue you writing to this standard and go above and beyond. Great job I applaud your work. Bravo.
I'm absolutely in love with the emotion and power exhibited in this poem. It's overpowering in just the right way. I would like to say that it's one of the strongest things I have ever read. I applaud your bravery with writing truly what you feel and I would like to also applaud the sheer impressiveness of the poem. I applaud every part of it. BRAVO. I would love to read more of your work you have me intrigued.
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