I liked the story.But i dislike the abrupt ending..But you had me wanting more in the end which proves that it was quite intersted in the story..I also like the way this story brings you into it you feel as if you are watching this entire situation unfold yet you have never experienced somthing quite like it before..Personally i enjoy the fact that you made it so your main character wasn't alone on seeing this "ghost" the doctor was also a witness..Which leads me to question why could the two...

Wow I am absolutly astonished at the level this was written at. I enjoyed this peice emensly.The use of vocabulary had me using a dictonary but i enjoyed it. Where did the idea of this piece originate?..I loved the first sentence it gave a nice image and placed me into the story right away. The elements of this story are also by far great. The ammount of time put into this peice must have been tremendous i had to read it twice to get everything..But i enjoy reading pieces that make me thnik a...

I like it and wow what a dream...Dreams are hard to put in poetry but i think you did a good job of translating a tohught into a work of art..Very nice

I like the form of this poem it's very elegant. I also love the vocab use, very nice words used in the poem and an extremely interesting voice used. Continue writing i enjoyed your writing throughly.

I like the poem. The Structure threw me off alittle but altogether i like the poem the language used in the poem was very well used and put together. All in all I enjoyed the poem continue writing.

The format of your haiku is off you only have a 4-6-4 format it should be 5-7-5...other than that i like the piece and the content the words are very well chosen...good job overall.

I love the content that you are portraying.Although i am confused as to whether it is supposed to rhyme or not...although if it isn't it is amazingly well written.Good job and keep writing.

Wow great job perfect haiku format 5-7-5 ..I like the cute words used...it was great i liked it.

I'm absolutely in love with the emotion and power exhibited in this poem. It's overpowering in just the right way. I would like to say that it's one of the strongest things I have ever read. I applaud your bravery with writing truly what you feel and I would like to also applaud the sheer impressiveness of the poem. I applaud every part of it. BRAVO. I would love to read more of your work you have me intrigued.

That is an absolutely amazing poem and I think every poet in the world has been at that point at least once. I am impressed with this poem just because of the light it sheds on the reality of art and more directly poetry. I sincerely hope you continue you writing to this standard and go above and beyond. Great job I applaud your work. Bravo.