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AGE:
18
LOC: China
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
LOC: China
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
Hi,my name is Janie.I love reading.
So i beagan to be a writer ,writing
lots of poems.Though i just write
few,Later i will write more.
Thanks for you if you can give me some
advice in writing,i’ll be very glad.
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Liar,I'm an liar,liar is me. The grey hair remind me of something,which hur -ts me so sharp.I feel pain and something crime i -n and out my mind. The waterfall pulls down with a clear sense of :feel like eager to be forgiven by those i love. Next day everything may be past ,hope!
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Another funny sound came near ,yeah....he sangs in a small sound with its clearly pouncation,i li -ke it a great deal.It seems to make my and this living buliding another life.It's pertty nice.
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Yestday,i climb to the window,all changed. You know ,everything turns into some magic -al stuff.True ,close to emotion.Nice to touch. Spring comes in a sudden way,a further dis -tance with the wind you could feel slicely,soft, perhaps seems like the feathers. Off the place,i came outdoor,lots of green derocating all the warm world,with the lovely sme -ll floated by the colour bubble.A piece of light green leaf slipped down from its beautiful body( the branch of the tree).Yeah,just it,impress...
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I love to hear the sheep bleating; I love to catch the smell of flowers; I love to watch the trees,decorated the green spot,lovely and truthfully,with a clear mind to observe all the spring news.
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It's pretty breief in words.Clearly.To make everyone knows exactly about the things what you exprienced.Good job!
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It's a poetry about love in my oppion.It use some mataphor,such as the headline :the fire.I do like this kind of way to write some things.
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