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AGE: 20
LOC: Cape Girardeau, MO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 08

I’m not a good writer. I’m not a good reviewer. I just love to write and love to read what others have to say.
I love Saul Williams and a bit of Bukowski. Chbowski and mark hadden have written some of my favorite books.
I am a musician.
I am here to hear what you want me to hear
:)

I hate myspace…

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Poetry / Eye of the Storm
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The clouds around her head, whisper secrets I’d die to hear. The storm’s pulling me in. I’ll find shelter in her eyes.
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Poetry / War's Song
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Simple subscriptions in olive drab. We pose a condition of all we have, Is all they want and they’ll all grab, Bomb strapped vests and make a stab, At life as we know it. We’ve sewn it. We reap it. It’s sad. When borders choose bullets, To get a word in last, And aim they’re bibles at the nearest flag. Lets lay down our books. Let our arms down fast, And remember dear friends, My eyes and your eyes, See those same blasts.
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Filling ventricles In the heart of hearts To beat the drum we all walk to The strokes are the same
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Follow swift, The hand is passing. The past is gone, The present ever lasting. Reaching for the end, As the thumb tack fails. The clock falls fast, As life derails.
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Why isn't Times New Roman Good enough any more Font styles style lies In all the colours of the rainbow Colours that sometimes show The insanity of the youth, so One may wear his straight jacket Or lack there of Any darkened eyes make the truth They behold Unanimously misunderstood Overlooked Just open your eyes You know you should Bandage the wound That their favorite razor would Bleed the blood of a thousand suicides Seek the trust of a boy dead to our lives It might be good It might be goo...
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I really like the broken up style you wrote this in. I think it helps it to grab the readers attention and keep them reading. Very nice piece. Keep up the good work.
This is really repetitive. all most to the point of annoyance but it does have a kinda cool ring to it. The first time I read it though all I noticed was the repeating and it pulled away from the point.
I had to read this one a few times over. It really all comes down to the simple question at the end but you made it so much more deep of a question with everything that came before it. It really made me think. I would suggest lessening the amount of 'big words'. it kind of took away from the intensity I thought when I had to stop and think about almost every line. That may be just me though. Overall I really liked it. Keep up the good work!
Poetry / Mr. Hill
This poem is very fun. It has a nice quick feel to it that makes it go by so quick I read it twice through to get the full effect. And laughed both times by the way. Keep up the good work!
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