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AGE: 30
LOC: Flossmoor, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 29

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Short Story / First Trip Out West
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I’m driven back to the days I spent in California. I have given thought to them recently and anecdotes from then have come to mind. I don’t know why or what meaning they have. I remember my first journey after the film classes. I got a call from Norm and a date was set to start our adventure in the film business. I boarded a flight at O’ Hare airport and flew to meet him in Tahoe. The planes’ destination was Reno “The Biggest Little City In the World.” . I remember the flight being labeled a...
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Short Story / Viv
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Jimmy Viverito, Viv, died at 5:03 am New Years Eve 2006. His car was hit west bound on I-55, tumbled off the shoulder and rolled eight and a half times. The cause of death was blunt trauma to the head. I could have told you he suffered that years ago. It would explain a lot. I returned home after a year-long weekend out west. A time in my life fueled by drugs and alcohol. So different from now. I came home to the family business which has turned into more of a racquet. Electrical contracting...
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Flash Fiction / Reader's Revenge
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Short Story / My Neurosis and Hers
Well written. It has good pace and is easily read. There is one confusinfg part in there. "And soon as her kid fell asleep something she began to share with me." It must be rephrased. Even though it doesn't really go anywhere, I do like the ending. It's more of an anecdote which I'm fond of.
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Short Story / Six Years
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Poetry / Idle Question
Nice outing. Nothing original here though. What is your love with the sea? Can you describe it better? This seems ordinary, nothing that hasn't been said before. I guess I just don't get your poetry. It seems so plain and ordinary.
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