Once there was a love that was never supposed to happen But it did. Once there were two people who should have stayed a part But they didn't. Once there was a marriage that was supposed to last a lifetime And they tried. Once there were problems that they said they'd work through But they lied. Once there were memories of all the good times they shared Then they died!
I have this story in my head that has gone untold It's been written in many languages and by the millions it has sold It starts off with me doing this thing Or maybe it's being done to me The story is in my head so, Sometimes it's hard for me to see. It seems so real at times that I wake up and I cry It's not a sad or painful story, so I'm not really sure why. Maybe the story in my head is a R&B medley or a Country song With lyrics of death, infidelity or love gone wrong. The thing is, I don'...
I'm one day away from forever Because "come the day after tomorrow" I'll no longer be captivated by your smile Thoughts of you will no longer make by body shake or My mind wonder of the possibiliteis of what if... Come the day after tomorrow I will rise to a sun that shines on me I will awaken with a glow that radiates my persona Not one that is shivering from being in your shadow Come the day after tomorrow I will say "what will make my day"? But for today, I shall cherish, love and always b...
Izzy...point well made and taken. However, I am one of those spelling, grammar, and punctuation IN NEED OF HELP type of writers myself. I guess we have to look at it like this; there are singers and musicians. Some singers can play an instrument and some musicians can carry a note. But, when you get a Singer that can WRITE/PLAY and PERFORM...you've got an ENTERTAINER. That is the sweetest victory. I believe that it's a lot easier to "TEACH" someone to fix their mistakes than it is to teach so...
This piece was a nice slice of "truth" for me!! I enjoy the hidden meanings behind the meanings. Some how I think you're exposing yourself to someone else. Laying your feelings on the line. Exposing yourself in spite and despite the fact that "there's no telling" what may or may not come of the real you that you've revealed. Not sure if that was truly the intent or not...just my take. And as you say..."truth is what you feel". Good luck and best wishes to you in reaching all of your goals.
I love the line... "creating a silent symphony in my closed mind". Every time I read this piece I pick up another word or line that changes my mind as to what I "think you meant". Somehow I don't really think that I want to know the real explanation because what I've contrived during my "mental ecstasy" is far too sweet to taint with something like...reality. I just realized the age posted above, and once again I must admit that my theory is so true...WORDS are so much more powerful than NUMB...
I'm not sure why this piece keeps drawing me back into it! Perhaps I'm in search of my Angel as well?! By the second or third read thru...I was hearing a melody in my head. I think that this piece could make a GREAT rock ballad. All it needs is a few additional lines added as the hook. On second thought...maybe, the hook could be... "Blue light but no sound Am I thankful I was found?..." Okay, I have to stop reading it. Everytime I go back I find another line that pulls me into the peace. "Sh...