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AGE:
21
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 14
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 14
Hello! We are JigglePuff12 notice we said we. Wat we meant was two peole are controlling this account, so, if you like life, address us as TWO people. What you tell us we keep it between us. What we write, we do together and we never reject a person being our friend. We go to FMS. This is our first account on urbis and whats not better than one with your best friend. If we answer I or me or not plural, sorry, its hard with there being two of us. We are two girls and we are straight. Check out our stuff! Love ya!
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When we're together, we will never fall apart, we're one together.
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Version 1
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When we are together, we will never fall apart, we are one heart.
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I saw one typo 3rd line 'waning' should be 'warning' other than that good job
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Exactly 5/7/5, and I like how you used less words, that had a bigger effect. This antisapates how people hesatate to do anything when its reaining, how you are nervous to cross the street in rain, and how kids can't play outside because its raining. This was amazing
Ok, the spanish confused me. Sometimes you translaterd to english, sometimes you didn't. As for the story, It needs to be described morer, don't just say in a bar say the name, and describe the population, is it flooding with people?
Ok, I really like this. One typo, when you talk about Tya and the sniper, you say its a man and then you have "HER response was another bulet fired at her." Her should be his. Action/romance/secret, i love it
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