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Prologue There was a faint glow along Calhoun Court and the low hum of the street lamps was very soothing to the assassin. His moves were very calculated as he slowly made his way across the deserted street. Knowing that he would’ve gone completely un-noticed even if the street had been populated at this hour put a grin on his long face. Safely across he took a moment to breathe in the night air, hot night, he thought. ...
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Well, this is a very interesting piece. I enjoyed it a lot, but only because I'm so used to writing scripts. This read more like a script than a story, which might not be a bad thing really. Usually I enjoy a little more detail in a story, but you pulled this off nicely because your dialgoue was descriptive in it's own way. I suppose you could still do with a little more physical descriotion to bring your environments alive. Aside from that I thought you did a good job of setting the story up...
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