My dear Natalie Raquel I want you to know I love you and will be there to see you grow Eventhough your dad gave you up at birth I never want you to underestimate just how much your worth You see I too grew up without a dad because he didn't want me Everyday I blamed myself and asked God why My own mother held me when I began to cry She always knew the right words to say to me I'm not sure I'll be able to explain it to you when the time comes So for now I am doing what I do best I'm writing to...
my heart says you love him my head says he won't change eversince i had your baby my life's been rearranged i love you, yet i hate you for all you put me through i sit and cry thinking about you wondering why we couldn't make it work i wish we could get back together but i know i'll end up hurt
I thought I knew where I was going and what I was going to be. Then a little girl came along and completely changed me. One look in her eyes is all it took for me to see. This isn't what I want her to grow up and be.
wow....im not really sure what to say...i thought this writing was very well put together and done...i can tell u put alot into it...very nice job...i love how this piece flows together all so well...keep it up...nice work
Cass... I like the concept of the poem it has a great deal of meaning behind it. However it does need more origionality. I know what you're capable of doing and I've read some of your writing in class. I think you could've done some what better and put more thought into this. But for the most part it's pretty good.