Jocelynn4909's profile
AGE:
13
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 16
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 16
I’m someone who makes their own decisions. I don’t dwell on my past or look forward to the future, I live for the moment.I am a person who believes anger is poison so I try not to let myself get to caught up with my emotions. People see me as many different things, I see myself as one thing, A person. A person who is trying to make it in the world. Lately I am taking full responsibility for my actions. I try not to disappoint people but I always find a way to. I set my stakes high and attempt to achieve them and I won’t give up till I succeeded. I put other peoples happiness in front of my own.Thoughts are just a state of mind and I tend to find myself in the worst ones. I’m not normal because normal is an overstated fact. A very wise p…
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Here I am, Sitting, Crying. Now it's not like I'm sobbing crying, the kind of crying when a single tear falls every couple seconds. "So that's it?" I say, stammering over the words. I'm taking in every single thing about him while I have the time to. His Abercrombie sent surounds me as I'm examining his Freshly cut brown hair. Looking at his eyes, Oh his eys. Right now they seem to be green meaning he's angery or very ups...
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Stammering over my own thoughts, Again and again, Falling deeper and deeper into them, Over thinking the one thing that doesnt need thought about. Thinking shouldn't cause so much pain, Thinking shouldn't cause so much hatred. Thinking shouldn't make me feel this. Thoughts are supposed to be kept to yourself, Not supposed to be shared with everyone and anyone, Not supposed to be said aloud , Not to supposed to be over thought, Thinking is no longer a sacred thing.
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Music isnt just a form of art, It's a form of life. Its like a gate way drug, Not only is it addictive but it can open up the doors to soooo many Opportunities Music can come in any shape or form Truly music can cure your pain , But only if you invite it in.
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Im here, Your there, But thing is, Here and there are the same as everywhere. Im living today for tomorrows satisfaction, Your living today as tomorrows destraction. I could always say I'm right and your wrong But that would make me wrong for saying I'm right. They do say that oppisites attract, But Who's to know?
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Life, Spins right passed you. Life, Is one big dream. Life, Can be a nightmare or, Life, Can be sweet dream. Life, Can take you in any direction. Life, Can take you left, Life, Can take you right. Life, Can go spirraling down right infront of you or, Life, Can go shooting right up infront of you, Life, Is based on decisions. Life, Is always what you decide. Life, Is something that you live, Life Can be a volentary or involentary action. Life, Is what you decide to make it.
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This was short, Yet got to the point quickly. I think if you tweaked it a bit this would be a very fine piece.
Honestly, I liked it. Very much. I hope you continue so I can read on (:
It seems to me as if you think low of your self. I believe this could be a very good piece of writing, Keep it up, and get some self esteem I guarantee you will love it (:
Not much to say about content given. Like when you talk about him I don't know much about him as in when you talk about your nervous habits of liking your lips, I wonder if he notices or if he has his own nervous habits. Over all though a good piece.
I like the choice of words.. But they don't fit together quite right. It's not very clear to me. It's making me think of something very painful, something or some type of pain someone or something is in.
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