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26 Reviews
25 Comments
Carolina Beaumont was conceived in the back seat of a Volvo in 1976. When Sylvia Beaumont told Dwayne, her loyal boyfriend of 6 months, what had occurred, he skipped town so fast and so completely that his own mother didn’t hear from him for almost two years and when she did he had changed his name to Carlos. Sylvia was swayed very little by anything, and when “Carlos” skipped town she simply moved out of her dorm, back into her mom and dad’s house and took to wearing shirts that would leave ...
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10 Reviews
1 Comment
Beatrice Bigglesbee scrunched up her nose, And said, “This broccoli smells like dad’s toes. This meatloaf is dry, there’s no jam for my bread.” And whined and complained ‘til mom sent her to bed. Beatrice was shocked! How dare they get mad? It wasn’t her fault that it tasted so bad! ‘Making me starve to death doesn’t seem fair!’ She thought as she carefully brushed out her hair. Then Mom came up first, and was followed by Dad, She got bedtime kisses as she always had. And goodnight hugs too, ...
Version 1
7 Reviews
1 Comment
Beatrice Bigglesbee scrunched up her nose, And said, “This broccoli smells like dad’s toes. This meatloaf is dry, there’s no jam for my bread.” And whined and complained ‘til mom sent her to bed. Beatrice was shocked! How dare they get mad? It wasn’t her fault it tasted so bad! ‘Making me starve to death doesn’t seem fair!’ She thought as she carefully brushed out her hair. Then Mom came up first, and was followed by Dad, She got bedtime kisses as she always had. And goodnight hugs too, but ...
Version 1
8 Reviews
4 Comments
The line of her body was soft and fluid across the bed. My eyes caressed the curve of her waist, and neck and gently poured over her legs as they stretched and stretched over the sheets. The half moon silhouette of her breasts drooped ever so slightly toward the bed into lovely smiles that seemed sweet and young. The memory of my mouth closed over her nipple flitted ever so quickly across my mind and for a moment awakened a desire to take her again. Her dark hair hung across the pillow, in s...
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