Jskins's profile
AGE:
40
LOC: West Palm Beach, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 20
LOC: West Palm Beach, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 20
I am a Father who has been blessed with three of the most talented, wonderful children a man could ever dream of.
I am person of great passion and passions. Music has always been a huge part of my life… I have been a working musician since I was 15 years old. I’m also a martial artist, a motorcycle fanatic.
Before July 2005 I had never written anything creative before.
Most all of my poems were inspired by a very complicated and intense long distance love affair. In the new year I plan to try and write less to one woman and more to people in general.
I have no writing education at all, I started writing from pure emotion as many people do, so therefore reviews of my writing are very much appreciated and taken to heart.
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Deep in my eyes You see the dream you dare to dream The depth of our perception reflects the likeness of love A love that catches the morning sun and holds it for you only Waves of desire blanket our existence Leaving you helpless to resist my searing will Sprinkles of dew fall from our pleasure soaked bodies Exploding together in a climax of embedded devotion Follow me to the gate of everlasting essence… For I will always love you… by Jskins
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Deep in my eyes You see the dream you dare to dream The depth of our perception reflects the likeness of love A love that catches the morning sun and holds it for you only Waves of desire blanket our existence Leaving you helpless to resist my searing will Sprinkles of dew fall from our pleasure soaked bodies Exploding together in a climax of embedded devotion Follow me to the gate of everlasting essence… For I will always love you… by Jskins
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Lying in a lake of solitude awaiting my angel’s kiss Songs within my Soul long silenced, the beat of my heart remiss This toxic tug of love, has eaten my esteem... Paralyzed my life, melted all my dreams Conversing with myself, confronting all my fears An Idealist who can’t give up the ship is bound to go down in tears I wonder if I made you up, to fill a hollow hole? Comfort me when solitude begins to take control Are you just a dream, a nightmare of my mind? I live each day inside a vision...
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Seeing through the eyes of the misfit and lonely Hearts explode from the fear of it all Propelled by failure, I shake with fright Wondering where will my head lie tonight? Under the clay or on top of your thighs? In a cold shallow grave, our spirits arise Insides rot with the test of ones heart Craving and hunger, what keeps us apart Broken down by the cancer seclusion Casting out love, born free of exclusion Pounding out beats until the fat lady sings Leaving this place, forgoing his wings ...
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My eyes, deep in my eyes You see the dream you dare to dream The depth of our perception reflects the likeness of love A love that catches the morning sun and holds it for only you Waves of desire blanket our existence Leaving you helpless to resist my searing will Sprinkles of dew fall from our pleasure soaked bodies Exploding together in a climax of embedded devotion Follow me to the gate of everlasting essence… For I will always love you… by Jskins
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I have been on this site since it's inception and this is one of the best pieces I have read. I usually stick to poetry as my concentration for reading is shorter than a penis dipped in Co2. I'm not easily impressed and I am incapable of being anything but sincere. That said, your writing ability is stellar! Highly intelligent...filled with passion and has a very appealing open vulnerability to it. If you are not thinking about using your talent professionally, that to me would be a real wast...
I loved this haiku! I have never written a Haiku...to write a good one is much harder than it may seem. To put forth passion using so few words to me shows great thought and talent. This piece shows both!
Well written, dark and has a message for us. Keep you chin up to the positive, the Earth needs you!
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