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AGE: 23
LOC: Madison, WI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 23

Theres alot to artistic self expression. Poetry is vital to an open heart. Art is vital to the soul, and nature is vital to life.


Peace Love and Eternal Happiness : )

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Me Proud of my Melanin Pigmentation As should you be Proud were you came From Its not about Race Creed or Orientation Its about all us bein jus One For de tribes came from da continent known as Africa To all Ya Racial Puritans Im aimin Dis at Ya Tellin Ya dat ya beliefs is all Done Cause dis Life is Loven what ur made From An its Hard to tell Ya all about Race An How Ya Judged by color of ur Face If you look neat and cleaned Laced Could not be enough to Some Because of me Melanin Pigmentation...
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i dance alone when i have no one to dance with i dance alone when i have someone to dance i dance alone because she just went to the bathroom i dance with a complete stranger someone i think is alright i get rejected at the dance something that will happen sometime but all around at least i dance
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i dance alone when i have no one to dance with i dance alone when i have someone to dance i dance alone because she just went to the bathroom i dance with a complete stranger someone i think is alright i get rejected at the dance something that will happen sometime but all around at leat i dance
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A painting An imperfect picture Paint words together then label them scripture Poetry like a sculpture Can pave our very culture Art captures the essence of our human nature Like the need to feed Our minds must create Consuming the eluding inspirations of the fates Have determined Our time has come The human race's run is almost done While here in the U.S. of A were having fun While our leaders are leading us to KINGDOM COME! Its a cruel fact its wack To ever "pre-emptively" attack Another br...
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as i write sitting down standing still infront of this computer aparatus im deep inside of this just puttin down what comes to whats on my mind so what does it take how many people and how much time do i have left to drop a rhyme and how bout you you know why i do what i do hold to whats true its deep inside of you survival see things through but the road is rough in reality common criminality a nail to the coffin now who is bluffin no jokin no lyin the earth for our existence... our existenc...
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There is a beautiful innocence to you in this poem. Like you know your growing up, or something like that. i guess not growing up, i dont even know your age. But your poetry speaks volumes. Whose garden is this? it sounds like a beautiful piece, like the days I love here in Madison WI. In the sun, or in the Rain. i would throw some heavier vocabulary on it. it makes it sound more refined. im not one to talk though, most of my poems are inspired forms of Hip Hop. But i like the classical style...
Poetry / Hell Poem
Wow the landscape was intrepid. You put a vivid image in the mind. Thats where power lays. Your description of the eyes, the soul encased... Good work. Theres a depth of range that makes this poem incredible. I wouldnt want to go hell. But if it exists theres certaintly goin to be alot of people goin there. I like the reference to, "Surrounding this vile lord, an army of doctors and strategists, all bent, dirty creatures themselves, seek mastery and peer review over the arts of inducing pain,...
There was a deep essence to this piece that I liked. Its kinda dark and draining. Yet its kinda captivating... Its kinda slow though. There needs some more enthusiasm in it. Good work though. Take care and take it easy. Peace Juan
I like how random each paragraph was. The public service announcements have helped make this peace funny. Thats good that it had humor and was at a steady rythem. Good work and good job. Peace Juan
Quotes / illusion
Very wise... Yes indeed, maybe too wise. One click, how far is that. I foot. Very good saying. Like it should be in a fortune cookie. : ) feel free to review my work. peace Juan