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AGE: 101
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 25

Optimistic, confused and amused. Strong-willed and adventurous. Seeking solitude and time to collect my thoughts, so that perhaps I may write something new worth posting.

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Version 2

20 Reviews 19 Comments

Chicken. Fried chicken. All we wanted on that fateful Friday night was some damn chicken. A relatively simply acquisition, right? Let’s find out, shall we? 7:15 pm - Sean and I pull up to the KFC on the corner of Messner and Hempwood. "HELLO" comes the obnoxious sounding voice from the other side of the speaker. "Hello?" I say, probably sounding equally obnoxious. I have a bad feeling about this place already. Which is only worsened after I have to repeat three times my order for an eight-pie...

Amuse / Entertain / Warm a few hearts

Humor/Satire - Overall

Version 1

5 Reviews 5 Comments

Amuse / Entertain / Warm a few hearts

Humor/Satire - Overall

Version 2

13 Reviews 15 Comments

Every day at work A penis showing contest “Mine’s bigger than yours!” Grown men act like boys. They make extravagant claims, And hurl expletives. Buying bigger cars, Houses, and TVs, trying To trump each other. Why not whip it out? Show that schlong! Get it done with! And move on with life.

Haiku/Senryu - Overall

Version 1

6 Reviews 8 Comments

Every day at work A penis showing contest “Mine’s bigger than yours!” Grown men act like boys. They make extravagant claims, And hurl expletives. Buying bigger cars, Houses, and TV’s, trying To trump each other. Why not whip it out? Show that schlong! Get it done with! And move on with life.

Haiku/Senryu - Overall

Version 1

39 Reviews 43 Comments

"Self-centered people are rarely self-sufficient people."

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by Howard_Bushart

Whoa...the ending knocked my socks off. Great drabble you got there. The only (very minute) thing that turned me off a little was when she says “Anyway, thanks. You’re a really nice guy.” It just seemed a little...blase? (I'm not sure if that's the right word). It just fell flat a little (mostly the "nice guy" part), but then again as I re-read this, it seems it may have been intentional. Perhaps you can enlighten me? :) Overall though, I thought it was fantastic, and had me wanting to read m...

by annette

Wow...you said so very much with so few words. I'm honestly at a loss as to how to critique this. It's poetic, thought provoking, and says a lot about who you are. At the very least it's piqued my interest in reading more of your works. Thank you for sharing!

by sagittarius1212

When I read the title for this, I just knew I had to review it as music is a passion on mine too. I think the subject is appropriate to this type of poetry, however this particular piece left me wanting a little more. Each line seems to hold a separate idea, not really flowing together at all. They seem disconnected from each other. Perhaps not ending each line with a period, and rewording just a tad would help make this more coherent. But I think the subject and the attempt are a step in the...

by cavscoutgh75

As I'm quite obsessed with zombies, this story instantly attracted me. I will say that I like your imagination and like how descriptive you are in parts of the story, especially when you first enter the supermarket. The run-on sentences and change in tense mid-story (ex: "He spots the aforementioned ghoulie on all fours seemingly devouring something that he can’t quite see. No matter, the thing is there and it was time to move out smartly. The things clothes were spotted with patches of blood...

by shadow_words

Great poem! The imagery was fantastic and really helped me feel like it was me speaking the words. I think people will be able to easily relate to what you are expressing here. What I really liked about this piece was the feeling of desperation throughout the verses, with the exception of the last verse, which really put the final touch on the poem with a feeling of defeat and a little bit of acceptance that this new person will never be able to replace the one you long for. My only complaint...

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