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AGE: 100
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 20

I’ve been gone from Urbis for a while, but I’m back!!! Can’t wait to get back on the wagon. :)

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Version 2

16 Reviews 17 Comments

Chicken. Fried chicken. All we wanted on that fateful Friday night was some damn chicken. A relatively simply acquisition, right? Let’s find out, shall we? 7:15 pm - Sean and I pull up to the KFC on the corner of Messner and Hempwood. "HELLO" comes the obnoxious sounding voice from the other side of the speaker. "Hello?" I say, probably sounding equally obnoxious. I have a bad feeling about this place already. Which is only worsened after I have to repeat three times my order for an eight-pie...

Amuse / Entertain / Warm a few hearts

Humor/Satire - Overall

Version 1

5 Reviews 5 Comments

Amuse / Entertain / Warm a few hearts

Humor/Satire - Overall

Version 2

13 Reviews 15 Comments

Every day at work A penis showing contest “Mine’s bigger than yours!” Grown men act like boys. They make extravagant claims, And hurl expletives. Buying bigger cars, Houses, and TVs, trying To trump each other. Why not whip it out? Show that schlong! Get it done with! And move on with life.

Haiku/Senryu - Overall

Version 1

6 Reviews 8 Comments

Every day at work A penis showing contest “Mine’s bigger than yours!” Grown men act like boys. They make extravagant claims, And hurl expletives. Buying bigger cars, Houses, and TV’s, trying To trump each other. Why not whip it out? Show that schlong! Get it done with! And move on with life.

Haiku/Senryu - Overall

Version 1

38 Reviews 43 Comments

"Self-centered people are rarely self-sufficient people."

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by shadow_words

Great poem! The imagery was fantastic and really helped me feel like it was me speaking the words. I think people will be able to easily relate to what you are expressing here. What I really liked about this piece was the feeling of desperation throughout the verses, with the exception of the last verse, which really put the final touch on the poem with a feeling of defeat and a little bit of acceptance that this new person will never be able to replace the one you long for. My only complaint...

by lostthunder

This piece has potential, but was hard for me to follow for various reasons. First, the author's notes say that this will be in journal form, but the first sentence does not read the way a person would actually write in their journal. It's definitely the beginning of a good story though, and I thought the rest of the piece worked great as a journal entry. Also, there were a few sentences that didn't read right: 1)"Why does any one person still assume that there is still innocence in this worl...

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by ParticoRomulus

I loved this piece. It really expressed to me a sense of freeness and eagerness. I don't think it matters what made you write this, because I feel the piece made it obvious what your feelings were. Plus, it may help other people apply it more personally if they don't know the background behind why you wrote it (if that makes sense). Thanks for sharing!

by l13dj13

I understand what you're saying here, but I felt more depressed when I finished reading this than humored. Sorry if I missed it. Maybe this would be better under "Quotes"? Thanks for sharing!

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