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AGE:
29
LOC: Gary, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 15
LOC: Gary, IN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 15
I’m basically trying writing out, I’ve been told I should persue it for a long while. So I’m actually seriously going for it now. Hopefully I can find an agent, and help me persue this goal of making a career from writing.
Any help would be useful.
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I hate your chosen style of dress/And I hate how you make me smile when I’m depressed/ I love when I’m wild, but I hate when you feel the need to save me from a mess. I hate the fact that we’re so close/cause between ave & kak-I don’t know who you love the most/cause they both do things that drive you crazy on the low that no one knows. And now I know what love & hate are, figuring it out wasn’t that hard/And you know we might not leave this alive, but if we do it wont be without being scarre...
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Now that my headache is gone, and when I say headache I’m referring to the woman I woke up with this morning, I suppose I’ll have a decent day. Stepping out my apartment and into the hall, I begin inhaling what I think to be air, or at least it is suppose to be. I gag and twist my face for a moment. It smells as if someone just didn’t bathe for a week, and decided to run a mini marathon and use the hallway carpet as a sweat band. The hallway was so humid today; I could literally see the funk ...
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This story by far had me and kept me interested from the second paragraph on down. (It was hard to really concentrate seeing as how I'm at work now reading) The plot and character we're believeable. They all came off as the 'leave it to beaver' type neighborhood. It was amazing to see how one trip could make a group of friendly neighbors act like a bunch of blood thirsty criminals. And to make it worse, they all were trying to hide it all from Helen. It was a shame that someone so little caus...
This is a good piece. Nothing major a few grammatical errors. Other wise there's nothing really wrong with this piece. Its a cool story from what I read. It kept my interest far more than I thought it would. It flowed nicely at parts, those parts are the ones that sucked me in and kept me reading. The mini fight between viv and her mom. The girl Oakley was dodging at the bar, and then the phone call to viv. Parts like that kept me reading to figure out what goings to happen next. As well as i...
This was definitely 'different'. Thats about i can really say. I dont know any person that would be calm about being cut to shreds by a unknown 'ghost'. And even then once they realize whats going on still stick around let this 'THING' continue to use it as a scratching post. This is truely a first for me. I'm lost at the fact that this character was bleeding and being sliced, and he's cool about it. Either this guys is hard up to be touched or he was so scared he became stupid. I know it fel...
I'm a bit confused, because I read another story with these same characters but it was odd. Sera I'm assuming lived with Joan and hated Deliah for calling. I think it was the 'Phone Call.' Or maybe I read the stories out of order. I'm begining to think that "Phone Call" happen after the events of this story. Nice detail, but i wish you could've described her feelings toward Joan a little bit more. I liked the way you broke down the cook attire. Maybe describe a bit more how Sera felt while lo...
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