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AGE: 39
LOC: Columbus, OH
GEN: Female
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Novel Treatments / Prologue
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The crashing of a medical supply cart woke her up and her mind was immediately thrust from a peaceful silent darkness into a bright and loud chaos. She was obviously in a hospital emergency room, although she had no immediate memory of how she got there. She slowly sat up and took a quick assessment of herself. No obvious pain other than a tinge of a headache. No blood and nothing looked or felt broken. She was not hooked up to any kind of IV or monitor, so she assumed she was just being obse...
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Poetry / In My Mind
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In my mind, you are there. A permanent resident, living in memories, with me every moment. I feel your touch. Soft hands on my back, soothing as the sun upon my face. Warm lips meet for gentle kisses, savory softness melting inhibitions. Strong arms pulling me close, quiet sanctuary. Make me feel beautiful. Anticipation overcomes me. Excitement rushing through me, deluge of emotion out of control. Counting minutes until the next encounter, fall leaves drifting slowly one by one. Intoxicated ...
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Flash Fiction / To You, My Love
Nice work. Personally, I didn't need the explanation prior to the story. I really, really like the "not knowing" who or what the true love is. For me, the reveal at the end makes this much more powerful and a sad but true statement of our world today. I enjoyed this a lot and feel that it could be expanded upon, with a little more added detail the revalation at the end could be even more powerful.
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