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AGE: 24
LOC: Poway, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 03

“Hang yourself, poet,
in your own words.
Otherwise,
you are dead.”
-Langston Hughes

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Poetry / "Nothing at All"
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Beyond redemption I lie naked on the tile floor. Exposed and broken, a worthless mass of words unspoken, kisses when lips could not meet. And you stand tall your foot on my throat, threatening my heart with uncertainty. And you will never turn me away. You far too much enjoy stirring romances colliding in halos around you. Extend your though to me bleeding life, love, life without you is nothing at all.
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Poetry / Pupil
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5 Reviews   1 Comment
You're young and nothing matters but broken bottles and shattered dreams, scattered throughout an empty parking lot, scorched by the sun's rays and black asphalt. What those bottles once held, you will never know; Its contents, some unknown substance, evaporated and dispersed long ago. A thin layer still lingers in the air around you, clinging to your sweaty brow but, still, it's unrecognizable, like the magic you once knew. The essence of is not enough, you must see to believe. Someone shoul...
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Poetry / Rapture
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8 Reviews   7 Comments
Adorn my flesh with luxury, absolute, your scent tangible in midnight inquisitions eloquence conspiring with celestial bliss, euphoria reborn. Purity howls for recognition as naked compassion unfolds; redeemed and lingering in angel’s embrace. Silk seethes from fragile caverns staining your tongue, luminous on your kiss. Craving with desperate intensity; let yourself fall upon me, ivory scattered ‘neath torturous repetition. Lost in your chaos, uttering inconsistent inhales of utopia. Return ...
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Poetry / As We Should
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4 Reviews   0 Comments
Let me love you like angels' love their God, let me inhale you like a beggar’s dying breath. Be my reality, infinite and unfathomable; the soul to my being, the heart to my beat. Be my eyes, and I, your ears; let us conquer this world together, just as we should.
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Poetry / Taurus
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4 Reviews   9 Comments
Drink me, Taurus; Lap up my sweet infections and enjoy your disease, for there is no cure. I am the poison the dying man dreams of.
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Poetry / Seasons End
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Lyrics / Again
I do enjoy this piece, but would have liked it more had I not had to read 'baby' so many times.
Poetry / pay attention.
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I wouldn't say this piece is one that would warm anyones heart. The expression of love is beautiful, but saddening. I took this piece to heart because my brother is fighting the same battle, stage four liver cancer. I find it hard to critique this poem because of that. I guess, for sport, I will say it reads more like prose at times.
If the purpose of sharing this was to get a laugh, then you deserve a ten. :) I can't say much more than that...