The synopsis left little to the imagination but I thought I'd give it a shot. I'm glad that I did! This is wonderfully funny and entertaining. I see it as an homage to great zombie/spoof films. Though nothing has been out which successfully integrates both genres like this treatment does. Obviously there are some technical flaws but this was forewarned and won't be mentioned. I love the idea that zombies wake up everyday and carry on with their non-lives. It's a wonderful allegory bewtween th...

Wow. Each chapter get's progressively more in depth and more realistic. I'm a CSI nut and I love the realism in the character development and in the setting. The pathology reports and the dialogue are as real life as I've read and experienced. I particular yearn for more interactive dialogue between character's like Marc and Brian. These two have a symbiotic link together and their experiences explode when they're talking. I enjoy learning when I read. You've managed to add classic prose and ...

I really enjoyed the pacing and the extensive background work that went into this work. There were certainly some aspects which came under the umbrella of thriller versus crime caper but they were hard to distinguish which makes for a great all-around story. I also admired the fresh dialogue. It didn't come off as other "hitmen" stories. The dialogue kept me involved with the progression of the story. Now the critique. You may want to consider extending your verbage regarding description. An ...

Although I truly enjoyed the story as a whole there were so many distractions grammatically it made it almost impossible to keep focused on what you're characters were doing than what they were saying. Correct puncuation is a tenet if you're going to be a writer. Do your readers a favor and take the time to properly quote dialogue and speech. Once you've cleaned it up a bit I'll come back and give it my full attention.

The atmosphere was really well though out. I enjoyed it but it could probably use spellcheck or a cursory glance at it.

I absolutely loved this poem. It spoke of love in a fresh way. A way of truth and bearing and in a way that's still completely relatable. The horizon can be felt and dealt as easily as one imagines sharing a caring smoke after sex. This is Crowley-esque in demeanor and intent and is just as pure. There isn't any other way to describe the sincerity in therse words other than you had to have lived it at one point in your life. Hate, love, defeat, and rebirth all conjugate and draw power from ea...

I like where this story is going. Great character development and the dialogue is thought out and realistic. I would advise making more of an effort to expand on your detail. The interaction between your character's speaks more than using a bunch of needless words sometimes. Keep going and I'll await the next upload.

I read every word to these poems and they put me through a range of emotions which is what good poetry is supposed to do. These poems definitely took time to craft and arrange and you deserve accolades for that feat alone. Nicely done!