Katmellie's profile
AGE:
22
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 24
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 24
Hey all,
I’m a new writer to the world, but writing isn’t a new thing to me. I’ve always been interested in writing. Whether it was writing little stories for my own amusement, writing little scenes when I was bored in class and writing for a fandom. I used to have my own website full of stories about Stargate SG-1, none of them published, but were there for people to read. I’ve not decided to take my writing to the next level and learn alot more about what exactly I should be doing as a writer, and that’s why I’m at Uni now. Hopefully I’ll be getting back into writing stories and my poetry some more, and hope you’ll enjoy reading it.
Please feel free to email me (Katterific@aol.com, tittymel@hotmail.co.uk), or even add me at mys…
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I wish I knew if I had a family. Am I wealthy or poor? I would have killed to know if I had a favourite football team. I am a man but a man with a locked mind. A mind that doesn’t want to access the information I long for, that I really need to know. There is a scar deeply hidden in my hair, long ago healed but still fresh in my mind as though it happened yesterday. People take their memories for granted. They try to help me unlock my memories. Nothing helps though, but it always seems they w...
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Your hand touched me, burning me with a scar. My heart yearns for you, having each deep cut. The tone of your voice, makes me dance no matter what. Those brown eyes, hold an icy cold fix on me. Screaming for realease, you give me satisfaction in 'I Love You'.
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Time they say is forever, Time is something we all have, But would someone explain, Why time is so short for some? Happiness comes and goes, Happiness is like a drug, But would someone explain, Why happiness is so short for some? Days come one after another, Days are all we have, But would someone explain, Why days are so few for some? Life is a gift, Life is what we all posess, But would someone explain, Why life is so short for some?
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Of all the lovers in the world, Why did you have to drop onto my doorstep? My life was happy as pie, I had everything I ever wanted, Till I met you, You hurt me, lead me through turmoil, Make me cry and sad, But why did you have to drop onto my doorstep... Cause now I can't live without you.
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I like this little poem. Even though it doesn't consist of many words or lines, it incourages the image of heaven or an angel flying over head looking for another lost soul to take back/to heaven. Makes me think also of that godly picture, well not of a man, but when the sun is going down and it's flitering in through a load of clouds and gives off gold rays. Good poem!
This poem is interesting. I like it. I like how you were able to keep a certain rhythm in the poem. The imagery is really good and doesn't make it hard for the reader to imagine. I also like the way you were able to put some real feelings into the poem, just with the words you've used to describe the feelings show just how much the person is in turmoil over his partner leaving and then the simpliness of 'enthralled' as she comes back shows the happiness. Good work, keep it up.
I like the simpleness of your poem, it's to the point even though you don't use descriptions/imagery, there's enough there for the reader to make up a picture of there own. The last line really sums up the poem, 'empty'. Maybe you should have called it emptiness or something along those lines.
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